This was so tragic... I love the way you write stories like this one. Everything felt so real, like I was witnessing it myself. Poor Ichigo though.

Just HAD to post a review here even if it was published a while ago.
This is so awesome it has surpassed legal awesomeness. I have never read such a crazy-fluffy-murderous-tragedy story that i have loved because honestly, people don't know how to end 'em. They end up all sucky and stuff and are usually ruined. But you my friend, have created a monster. A beautiful, heart warming and soul breaking story.
Congratulations, and thanks for your vigilant effort.
It was a lovely one-shot :D

Oh Shadow... TT_TT
you've made me cry again...
This story was great. I can't tell you how much I loved the way you described their journey 3
If it wouldn't have been for those citizens starting to attack them... I'm sure they would have made it *sigh*
I love this story
Your storytelling abilities are just amazing and i don't have words..
just tears TTTT

Throat is closed, chest aches and I'm crying. This was beautiful.

Ssshh ;m; You are amazing!

I've kept this story in my inbox for the longest time because, when it first came out, I read the first five paragraphs and knew I was going to cry. I finally got up the courage to read it today and, lo and behold, I was sniffling pretty much the whole time. Your use of repetition here is absolutely perfect and I'm pretty sure I won't ever be able to hear the phrase "They were young and so in love" or "I'll see you on the other side" without my chest aching. Thank you so much for writing this masterpiece 3

This was so romantic! It's really surprising to see such an emotional work out of you (not that your stories so far haven't moved me - this was just extra awesome:). At the end of the story, my heart ached for them and the bittersweet feeling I felt when it all came to a conclusion still hasn't left me. I personally loved the ending... what a way to go. Everyone has childish fantasies, and whether they act on it or not; defines them. Black magic indeed. I look forward to more of your works and untameable creativity:3

Shit. I am pretty damn sure that this story just ruined me. I am an extreme Grimmichi enthusiast not just because those two boys are the hottest fictional characters in the whole entire universe, but because they compliment each other so perfectly that it hurts. I read a lot of Grimmichi fanfics, big shocker, and I'm actually really picky when it comes to the type's of stories that I like. I also critique Grimmichi stories, and I have to say, I could just bow down to you for this one. It's very rare that I come across stories like these where everything is just written so well that one can picture the scene happening all around them, feel what the characters feel, and even wish that this was how BLEACH actually happened.

You captured what others have a really hard time doing: the dynamic between Ichigo and Grimmjow. They're not a vanilla couple at all. Grimmjow is a hard ass and a complete loner in the sense that he's always been on his own and is better off that way. Ichigo being the passionate one who is stubborn in his own way. You created the perfect relationship between the two. It becomes passion-filled, rough, steamy, complex, and raw...yet dangerously beautiful.

Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us fans, it's utterly beautiful-a masterpiece even. This story is proof that you can change the foundation of a person's soul with a oneshot. The Grimmichi community and fan base is so lucky to have this story, it does the pairing justice. If only Tite Kubo or even Ichigo and Grimmjow could read it, that would be even better.

Once again, thank you.

-Emmy

Omg that was so beautiful I knew when I saw divineimmortalitys tweet t was something you'd write. You're the only author who can make me feel so bad all I wanna do is cry. If my boyfriend turns around he's gonna think I'm upset over something important like family death. Ichigo's last words to Grimmjow, great. Gosh I just think ya should be a author. You'd be wonderful and I'd buy your books

You just LOVE to make me cry, don't you? *sniff* it was so beautiful while it lasted... you are a puppeteer playing with the strings of my heart, one moment I'm smiling, next I'm crying...

Omgjshdfhsvdjwndnauduxhsbevrjdiahhs. I wanna cry. As always. Your story always always pull me and it plays like a movie to me. I love it. Despite the ending, it s awesome! !

This is simply beautiful. The ethereal aspect of the writing, how it is intense and yet detached, is breath-taking. When I finished reading it, the only thing I can compare the pacing to is that of a snowflake falling. It is unique and splendide (and yes, I use this as the French word because in English it doesn’t have the same feel of beauty and perfection) and you know it won’t last; all you can do is admire it before it melts. I love how the title is referenced throughout, how they follow their dreams with no regrets, no laws except unto each other. It perfectly characterizes them both, and you manage to mesh in this fragile quality of happiness, that is so elusive, and the passion that they both share, that is so present in the manga as well. As it is said, the brightest flame burns the shortest, and here it is exquisitely depicted. The ending could have been nothing but the bittersweet scene that happens, anything else would have been wrong, and would have shattered the illusion you so carefully crafted. Your writing is amazing, and I sincerely congratulate you on creating this wonderful tale. Just a couple of insignificant spelling mistakes I happened to notice (but wasn’t looking for so they may be others) “they made due” is “do” and “Grimmjow’s and Ichigo’s faits” is “fates”. So in conclusion, thank you, this was delicately beautiful and a pleasure to read.

This was the saddest I've read of grimmichi
I love and hate this story the pain shanks me but I smile as it does- I love this story
"Run away some where far far away "
They loved each other so much
This story of bony and clide bleach cross over deserves and A-
100 because its a wonderful story and I love grimmichi
-20 because of the PAIN YOU CAUSED ME
I love you and hate you but this story made me love you more!

You make me cry T.T Even though you've warned us that this has sad ending, I just can't resist the temptation to read your work so I read it. It's sad but still hopelessly romantic so I still can accept this kind of ending. Love how loving they are towards one another. The love is thick and they care deeply. Thank you for sharing this lovelt fic )

Oh my God, this is so sad. I almost cried and it felt like I had a lump in my throat when I was reading that last part. It is a great story.