You should specify when youre speaking about the past, and when you revert to the present.

how can zazuki be a teenager if his father was killed in the three factions war? That happened centuries, if not millenia ago. It bothered me that you only had zazuki approach rias, and not sona. Sona is just as important as rias politically, and she jointly controlls kuoh academy with rias. Simply brushing her off cant happen, since its her territory as much as it is Rias'.

Hmm quite the appetizer of a chapter

Hopefully you dont add a OC harem member this time. I hate OC female especailly when they act like puupy dog love

oh yea!

I'm enjoying the story so far but surprised by him using drugs but meh

Keep up the good work

Could Zazuki not be in the Rating Game? I just think that would take away from the ORC's accomplishments. I am perfectly fine with him training them, but staying out of the Game itself.

Cant wait to see Zazuki battle, though please don't add Asia to harem

Aaaaaaaand your stoty offically got runied after the addition of a OC typical puppy dog love girl as a memeber of Zazuki harem. Like seriously there are so many sexy hot girls in this show and u had to add an oc

Pease don add rias or asia to the harem. They are so boring to read cause there are so many of them out threr, make it with Akeno as main and try somee girls like xenovia, raynare, kalwarner,

Hope to see some lemons soon.

At first look, this is a Gary-Stu work...which of course I don't like much. But if you make Issei have the same harem...and seriously, make other non-paired characters part of your Harem, then I'd at least be willing to read this.

Hmm nice to read I would prefer longer chapters

Very interesting development can't wait for chapter 6

Hope you make lemons soon.