will hinata become Naruto's queen? i think since your in writers block, i have an idea you can try.
(a/n:just a word of reference the " marks are for the idea)
"Naruto calls the four girls to the throne room to make an announcement on who will be chosen to be his queen."

it IS not horrible, it IS SIMPLY AMAZING, you are by far the best writer, in the land well next to those who write to help people get threw tough times, like this one author who will one day be just as famous as the thin clergyman, who may i remind you wrote the railway series.

Damn, I really like this story. I hope you can update it soon and carry on :(

This is good. I hope u update soon and I hope naruhina get together soon

what the f...this story was going so good. please update :(

Col Continue plis

I was so giddy I could hardly breath, this chapter caught my attention with every word I read... From what I could tell this is going to be one heck of a fun and alluring read...

I love it, I just keep thinking: Hinata you're bae (before all else) you have to be his...
Naruto you're pharaoh, you get first and last dibs, Hinata is yours to have, so claim her and have her as your rider-die, your queen, the love of your life..

I loved that first chapter! I was so enamored with how well the Naruto characters were presented such as Naruto as pharaoh, I also live learning about the things of old such as ancient Egypt and its history especially its people. So this was definitely a fun read.
And it was pretty darn awesome!

hi haven't read it yet but you did ask for some inside of your Pharaoh how they would address them they wood say my Lord Naruto and they would never meet his gaze so no looking in the eye the Pharaoh was basically a god amongst men

Please come back and continue!

please come back to meeeeee... this fanfic is really grear!

really good!

whooa what will happen

awwww so cuteeee