I really like it. Its very dissapointing to stop..

I come back to re-read this from time to time not because I expect it to ever update but just because it amuses me. The first few chapters are solid but a tad stiff but the chapters on Tatooine become pure gold. Excellent use of the socratic method and witty banter that never fails to amuse. My friend group still occasionally references this fic and this characterization of Revan as "Plasma grenades are an objective moral Good"

It’s a great story and please continue the story

PLEASE FRIGGING' RE-CONTINUE THIS MOST FASCINATING STORY!

I demand an immediate update to this intriguingly amazing story my talented author!

Lol.. I am so in love with this story..
Please tell me your going to update..
I am dying to find out what happens next.

Nope. Not at all. Nothing's wrong with Plasma Grenades. XD

I love this Revan. He's frickin' hilarious! XD
I wish that this story had continued. Why'd it stop?

Gosh I really wish that you had continued this story, I honestly enjoyed its first few chapters as much as a lot of my go to EU books. I hope to see more in the future, but I will go forward grateful for what you have given.

Flawless. Just how I always pictured Revan.

Definitely liked the Yoda/Revan duel. Maybe I'm a bit of a fangirl but I always thought the Jedi and Sith of the Old Republic were stronger than the ones in the movie canon. That applies doubly for Revan, and so it made sense to me that even without utilizing both sides of the force he would be able to match Yoda (even if it was just a spar). I honestly think that Revan is significantly stronger than movie Palpatine (I dont particularly care for EU Palpatine, so I never account for him). I mean he hurls asteroids, can teleport, is the greatest duelist in the Jedi Order possibly ever (certainly at least in Old Republic times), can unleash both sides of the force at once and can stand up to a man who literally contained the force power of an entire planet. Compared to that, movie Palpatine isnt looking so hot.

Your author's notes are fun to read. Loved the dialogue in this chapter, really excited to read more and the take on the force (I always liked the balancing aspect between the two sides that the EU put forward, rather than the light being balance and the dark being chaos that was Lucas' idea).

My nitpick for the chapter isssss... the force is not female. Its isnt anything, it is pure energy binding us all together. It has no need to procreate, it simply IS. It is, well, an 'it'.

A good start so far. The only error I've really seen so far is that Revan was considered a Master at the time of his disappearance (but as you said yourself you aren't worried about canon, and that is something you find out in the book Revan). But what the hell, I'll gladly fill the role of 'nitpicker in the review section'. XD

In all seriousness you've already got me quite interested right off the bat, both with your clear, matured, writing as well as when the story is taking place. I will readily consume the remaining 4 chapters!

Fantastic Chapter!

Nothing at all