Reviews for Facade
offramp chapter 12 . 3/22/2007
I really liked it. Personally, I don't think that Dumbledore would have announced it in front of everyone. But maybe I'm wrong. Please Write More!
xXyousuckatlifeXx chapter 12 . 3/5/2006
i read and i am reviewing to tell you to update cause i want to read this story
Nicole chapter 2 . 3/5/2006
I really like it when James and Lily are together!

auctly I scroll through the Harry Potter fanfics and find the ones about them... I loved that!
kristin chapter 11 . 5/11/2004
Please write more. It's really good.
12234 chapter 11 . 7/11/2003
AH! finally another chaptor! I've been following your fic since you began with! I was trying to wait til the end, but i just couldn't help it. Please continue to write! Altho, i might add that i am a tad bit impatient (haha, no really) i'm sure many of us would heartily appreciate it if you kept updating because i'm so trying to wait for what happens next!
MoonFaith chapter 11 . 7/5/2003
I think James asked Mr. Nice-but-still-a-nerd-guy to spy on someone for him, cause nerds are ignored and they could sit two feet away from ya and you wouldn't notice them, half the time!
Niki-chan chapter 10 . 5/1/2003
The beginning was slightly weak, but towards the end you really got into the grove of the story. Terrific ending. Terrific plot. Can't wait for the next chapter
Clearbrook chapter 10 . 3/11/2003
I don't think that ANY part of that chapter was anywhere near stupid! This story is really good and I don't know why I haven't started reading it earlier. I can't wait for the next chapter!
MegHarts chapter 10 . 3/10/2003
i love it! moremoremore!
BlueBird chapter 10 . 3/8/2003
pretty kool fic!, please continue!, oh, and can you please update the "Hope Floats" fic as well?, its such a sweet fic!, thanx!
AyCee chapter 10 . 3/8/2003
a great fic. it really is ..ever thought of making them do a prank or giving them more than just the ordinary magic powers (i know that a lot of people use this but it would thicken the plot and certainly make it more exciting).just a and good 't take too long..lol
Ashes Forgotten chapter 10 . 3/5/2003
Bravo. Very few mistakes and while it is a bit confusing at the beginning you still managed to shape up the story. Of course it'd be better to give more background information to establish the characters more.
mimmio chapter 10 . 3/5/2003
That Courtney girl is evil!
everblue3 chapter 10 . 3/5/2003
Pictures of Lily posted on the bulletin board? Goodness, they must have been incredibly condemning if Lily would require a tranquilizer in the Hospital Wing.

There are a few parts of this chapter which seem to be curt and cut-off, and I look forward to further explanation - I know we're not 5 so everything need not be spelled out, but sometimes it is helpful to have a distinct thread of plotline weaving throughout the scenes, making each segment useful to the whole.

I did like it, however, and will wait eagerly upon the next one!
James' 1anONLY Lily chapter 5 . 2/11/2003
PLEAAAAAAAAAAAASE hurry up with the story~! I'm totally dyign to knwo what happens next! u have a great plot- not at all like those teenyboppers out there keep writing!
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