:D I really like this!
Could you do more with a similar headcannon?
I think that would be amazing!

Oh my god. This story was amazing! Written well and so interesting, it made my head explode. Thanks for writing it! I'm fangirling so very hard.

DAT ending for them both! *WAILS*
*DIES FROM FEELS*
:'(
You are to good for my own good at writing dark stories, but I'm hooked anyway!
I only just realized that you have a story with LalnaXSjin and a Sjips theme in here. Interesting.
I should really be doing my homework...
See you with your next story, hopefully!

Can't wait for the next update! :D

Another very good chapter with a adorable Sjips moment.:) can't wait to see what happens. :)

I love the contrast of the fluff of Sjips and the sorrow of Lalna's death.

This is really good, and I'm thoroughly impressed. I will definitely keep reading this as you upload. Can't wait for the next chapter!

This is... Wow
Awesomely dark and scary!
Looking forward to the next update!
Will Lomadia appear?
Loving this theme

That is perfect with some truely halarous moments. :)

Interesting... Very, verrrry interesting...
Looking forward to this!
This made me miss the Jaffa Factory though...