Reviews for Secret of the Serpent's House |
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![]() ![]() ![]() it's super cool how you reimagined this - I never thought about Ron being the one with the diary, but you wrote it so well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story thanks for sharing your writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love your writing and how you deviate from canon so well! loved the twist with Ginny toocan't wait to read the rest of the series! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting interesting. I love the changes from canon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's Arthur, I'm sure, since he'd been ImperiusedI haven't forgotten THAT detail! Also I am glad that my idea as to how Gilderoy plays into everything, was right. I am glad to see Ginny getting more active participation than being a victim, although I feel sorry for Ron. He's not a bad kid, just (frankly) underwhelming considering everyone around him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok wow! Love it getting better and better! Your stories are wonderful so far! Can’t wait to read the third one! Xox |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow, is Ron the one affected in this? Acting weird is worrisome... And good if Draco to grab the shoes... But damn it's curious that windows still are enough of a barrier from the eyes of the basilisk |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha oh Snape, thank goodness for your protego. I keep forgetting HP wasn't the savior character in this and therefore isn't a horcrux either. I'm excited to see where this goes |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooh I wonder if she'll end up a cat again in here! And excited to see where this goes |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jeez, it's already started :( ...we'll have to see how this plays out |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yikes, he shouldn't have done that...I'm amused Lily didn't berate him further but everyone likely didn't want to be around him |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yikesss, we know Arthur was imperiused...I wonder if it's still Ginny in this realm...she has been MIA |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohh, quite a few distinctions, and I rather like the pacing of this all. Soap bubbles gives it a nice little irony. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, so I take it the barrier isn't known for sealing itself even to Padfoot and Lily...I wonder who sealed it...Death Eaters vs Dobby or someone else entirely |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooh, is that Peter!? That's a twist if I ever saw one! |