TBH describing the massacre you should have just made it a oneshot so people can read it if they like to me it was just a waste of time to read I know nobody really great we into detail with the massacre in fics but still that was half of the chapter basically.

What ticks me off is Konoha is in the wrong by killing the Uchihas.

Imagine being the co-founder of a project, then having the other party take away what belongs to you as time passes, I would be out for blood as well.

The Uchihas, as irritating as they were, will always have my sympathy.

Thanks for writing this story, I find it really creative. Not so much in the plot so far, but the elements you have set up (the God stuff) and where I can see the plot going.

Every break away from Konoha to show Tobi or Itachi's perspective was extremely entertaining and we'll written. Itachi's portrayal is my favorite, I like how you handled his empty view of the world. It's a far cry from the suffering and anguished Prince act we often see in fanfiction.

But yeah, I appreciate what you are building up, and I look forward to seeing what else you may have planned in another update, whenever that happens. Good luck with your original fiction, and thanks again.

Damn! I'm super excited for where this is going!

I forget, and I'm currently too lazy to go back and search for the answer, but were fragments of Minato and Kushina sealed within Naruto like they were in canon? That could be the explanation for why the seal is reacting as it has to Kurama's whisperings, as it's not actually the seal itself that is reacting, but rather the seal's mortal guardians that are. Either way is fine, but I'm just curious.

Anyway, I don't know if I can accurately describe just how much I love this story. I find myself loving all (or at least all that I can think of) of the changes and discrepancies from canon, no matter how small or large they may seem, and I can't wait until the next update is released, whenever that may be. While I would love for said update to be as soon as possible, I also don't want you to sacrifice quality for speed, so take your time.

Not all that important, but the moon didn't exist back then, so the Shinju shouldn't have been able to almost "touch the moon" (no matter the height, you can't touch something that doesn't currently exist). Said celestial object didn't exist until Hagoromo created it to house the Jūbi's husk (which doesn't seem to exist here).

And what's with all of this about Kaguya Ōtsutsuki actually being human? In reality (as in in canon), she is actually a part of a clan/race of extraterrestrial/inter-dimensional beings who travel through dimensions seeking worlds inhabited by the God Tree, Shinju, so that they might consume its fruit and gain power. Kaguya consumed the Shinju's fruit not only to bring peace to Earth, but also to begin setting up fortifications and defenses against Momoshiki, Kinshiki, and others of her race, preparing for their imminent arrival. Her being human doesn't exactly change much, but it does change anything regarding her clan.

Also, what happened to Kaguya becoming one with the Jūbi?

Finally, what about Hagoromo's sons, Indra and Asura? Were they just not mentioned, or do they not exist in this universe?

Yeah, I know this is FanFiction and this you can basically do whatever the hell you want in your story (in response to the prior paragraphs), but I'm just saying.

Quite an interesting story so far. Difficult to say anything else currently as it is still very early on. But all the same, very interesting.

There was no moon at the time that the Shinju existed in its tree form.

Undertale References.

Wow. Kaguya's sons kinda feel like assholes here. The shinju was only after them right? And Hagoromo's all about peace and all, so why didn't he allow the Juubi to kill him and reclaim his stolen power? He didn't have the moral high ground here, and with his sacrifice all those deaths and continent rearranging around them would not have happened.
Here it looks like mister peace is OK with almost genocide as long as he doesn't have to die...
Dunno if it what you wanted to convey here, but that's what it feels like to me :/

Love the new chapter. I am slightly confused though. Was that vision suppose to mimic the movie with Shion or would it be closer to this stories equivalent of the Fourth Shinobi World War? Just curious. Glad this story is being updated again. Keep up the great work!

I'm honestly going to be a little disappointed if tobi isn't obito cause he was my favorite villain even when kishi hit him with the stupid stick for plot purposes because i saw him as an anti- naruto more so than any other character in the series and he was someone that naruto had to beat with wordsnot force but i did like the orochimaru and itachi fight and the dynamic between naruto and kurama is one of the best i have read so far so keep up the good work.

for such an interesting premise your story sure is unfocused and kinda boring, at least so far.
the main problem in my opinion is the lack of focus on kyuubi and naruto. instead you've got a whole bunch of scenes that don't really contribute much to the story and even end up detracting from the the more important central parts.

Very cool story! Love the idea of Kurama literally being a fragment of a god and having insight and powers of such. :)

Very intense, but I love the way you described the Massacre. :)