Reviews for Incomplete
LhumaineDuJour chapter 1 . 7/9
That was exactly what I was looking for ! thank you
Crystalzap chapter 1 . 12/1/2017
nice :)
IsoldeAhlstrom chapter 1 . 8/18/2016
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~! THIS IS AMAZING! Sorry, hyper on feels. Happens a lot. Excellent story!
whatswiththemustache chapter 1 . 6/22/2015
Aw, I got teary eyes...this was great! I love the 'I told you so' thing, though the details to what happened when Arthur died are confusing...guess that's the way it's supposed to be. Anyway, I really liked this! :D
Angel3687 chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
please continue! :D
Garland chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
YES! YESSSSS! FINALLY A GOOD REINCARNATION REMEMBERING FIC!

*cough*

Sorry, had to get that out. I was laughing all through this haha. I loved how you used most f the respective actors for the names of their reincarnations, fantastic touch there.
Book girl fan chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
It must be a horrible feeling, that something is missing, that without this person by your side, you are, to borrow yotu title, incomplete. That is the very reason why I do not believe in soul mates, at least not in the real world. Why would anyone want to feel like that, that someone is missing from their life?
1983Sarah chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
OMG, this was super amazing! I loved it so much! Great work!
Pandora151 chapter 1 . 6/9/2014
That was so wonderful I loved it so much :) The ending made me feel all warm inside and it was just so sweet! Great job!
Mika271170 chapter 1 . 6/9/2014
Oh that was brilliant!

They will always be together in any era an time!

The king and his warlock!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2014
Still lovin your work!
mersan123 chapter 1 . 6/9/2014
Thank you. I thoroughly enjoyed your short story. Always great to see something you have written! Many thanks.
MamzelleHermy chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
I loved it! This is one hell of a great birthday fic! Someone's lucky out there :)
Ocean Mint Leaves chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
I honestly really want to –actually- hug you right now. But until then, (one day, one day!) we’ll have to settle for online hugs instead. Oz, you’ve no idea how much your friendship means to me. You are, honestly, one of the best and most beautiful, kind-hearted human beings I’ve ever met. I was incredibly blessed the day I met you and every step along the way has been a wonderful and awesome ride. You’re so beautiful inside and out and I love you so so so much. Never forget that.

And, yes! Vienna Teng! My theory still stands; you make artworks out of songs I suggest. *fist-pump.* and awwww! I love you! *returns hug three times tighter and longer.*

First of all, UNIVERSITY MODERN AU! I have a feeling this is going to be incredibly epic. And right off the bat, your Eoin/Gwaine is PERFECT. It’s just…perfect. The dialogue is perfect. The setting….the clothes all over the floor (too true, sadly.) Ohmygoodness. *hugs and hugs and more hugs for you!*

‘IT WAS NOT BETTER AT FEELING THE HOLE ANYWAY.’ That’s just- I can’t even tell you how beautiful that is. I just- It’s so beautiful. My heart. *hugs you again.* The beautiful thing is, it’s true in so many ways. The advisor-the confidant- the fool * elbows you with a smile* the best friend-soulmate it’s not there and of course there’s a hole and ohgoodness…it’s so beautiful.

YOUR IMAGINERY THE NEXT PARAGRAPH. *waves, radio static, etc.* I am drooling at the sight of so much beautiful use of language and your mastery of it ( I always am, anytime I read any of your works haha. ;) ) Take my word for it, Oz, your writing is so brilliantly beautiful that it makes a lit major smile wider than a half-moon and brighter than the sun. It’s every lit major’s dream.

Okay, I can’t thank you ENOUGH (and love you enough and hug you enough for the matter.) for adding Lancelot/Santiago. *hugs you* THANK YOU for not forgetting him! I love you!
Okay, can I mention how awesome it is that Eoin/Gwaine and Bradley/High King Arthur, Emperor over the British are roommates? It’s just such an awesome concept! Besides, the bantering/ dialogue between them is superb. As always. Eeeeeeeep! *because well-written, character complimenting dialogue!* You are so brilliant :)
AAAAH. Why do I have a feeling that Arthur has had multiple reincarnations or something like that? ‘Last time- the time before that….’ Yup, you’re definitely dropping hints of something :p WHAT IF MERLIN STAYED ALIVE AND HAD TO SEE ARTHUR DIE AGAIN THOUGH? :o

Ohmygoodness, flustered Arthur! It’s so adorable, and I’m so glad to see Gwen.

Is this…protective! Arthur I see? Aldjsfalfjlsafjslkfjaslkfjalfjlsjf I’ll say it one more time, then. I LOVE YOU.
Okay, I wish I could actually analyze this but all I can think is alsdjfslkjfskjfsalfjslakjfaslkjfalkjflskjfgjtrhgieorkalfdajflksjdfklsjlfka ldsfjalsjflakfjdlaks

AND EVERYTHING STOPPED. Dsljflasjflsajflsa. This is too beautiful/ I wish I could remember a synonym. Wondrous, epic, lovely, beautiful beautiful beautiful. That’s what it is. It’s just….beautiful.

‘HE’D BEEN WAITING FOR THIS MAN.’ I just can’t really form a coherent sentence of praise so I’ll go with hugging you once again. I love you so.

‘A PHANTOM PAIN….’ Now, that’s just sdjfsdjflf. Oz. Oz. This is so incredibly touching and beautiful and everything I’ve ever wanted.

LONG AGO WHEN WE FIRST REALIZED?...well, they do reincarnate, do they? At least Arthur does. OHGOODNESS. You precious human being, you!
The whole death scene from long ago….I can’t really praise you enough, can I? The dialogue just lets so much transpire, the years, the fatigue, the fact that they’ve been through it before. I told you so? Connecting it to when Arthur first realized at the beginning….oh God, I love you. Your wording…. Just…you genius.

THEY HUUUUUUG.

‘Now that he was whole.’
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‘NOW THAT HE WAS WHOLE.’ Oooh, Oz. C’mere. *hugs you too tightly for your own good.*
He was immortal….all of that time. Ohmygoodness. Oz, you are brilliant. Heartbreakingly brilliant. :’)

‘HOW DID YOU SURVIVE WITHOUT ME?’ more like, how will I survive this? It’s too beautiful ohmygoodness. Oh, the bittersweet irony. :’) Because it’s true for both of them and awwww.

Oz, I don’t know what to say. The fact that you actually took the time to write such a beautiful heart-trending epic piece….this is, hands down, one of the best gifts ever given to me. All of your writing has a special place in my heart but this has an ‘extra’ special one. It’s beautiful and I can’t really thank you enough for this. Thank you enough for everything, that is. It’s been a lovely ride, my dear, dear friend, a great one. I love you. I love you.

NIL EGO CONTULERIM JOCUNDO SANUS AMICO

Oh, and Ashling Alroy: Yes, yes I am! And not only because she’s a truly gifted writer but a beautiful, awesome, fantastic friend as well. :)

Ps. this is beeaaaauuuuuutiiiifuuuuuuuuuuuul in case you didn't get that.

another ps. I LOVE YOU. Thank you. :')
bookworm2192 chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
That was beautiful. Nicely written!
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