I like your story very much!

This is really good
How about you do a sequel where Maleficent and Duval get together after the 2019 movie? :) you can put a bit of jealousy in there as Borra May want “the Phoenix” (Maleficent) to be with him ;)

Quite breathtaking. I always hope for more.

Interesting ending. Very interesting. They are a sweet couple

Wowwww sooooo perfect the love scene of this pair!

"She returned with the dawn, sweeping in as the fog rolled out." Such grand imagery! This piece is so beautifully and bewitchingly written. You should definitely consider re-visiting these two, as you're so adept at weaving the tapestry that is their tale. In fact, the blissful stars which shone in Diaval's eyes and about his mistresses skin, were likewise reflected in my own orbs as I read. Well done, winsome writer. Very well done, indeed. :)

*dies* you squished my heart

Awesome chapter, even though I didnt really liked the initial situation. Also, I dont think Mal would have slept with Diaval if she didnt trusted him, but I find it interesting that she has some hesitations because of her past experiences

update soon please!
I loved your fic, it's great!

I hope you update this series. Very well written and imaginative. I don't want a epilogue but instead more story so we get the true depth of how their relationship turns out. Keep of the great work! :D

I really like this. I hope you update soon. I would like to see where it goes

Ah, this was so wonderful and sad. I'd love to see an epilogue after they've survived where they can be together properly.

I have a feeling Diaval will recall something happened, but won't be able to place what exactly happened. Or he will be like "did I get high yesterday? I can't remember anything past me being here."

I really hope this will continue!

What?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO THIS CANNOT BE THE END?! Good scene especially if it's ur first writing attempt of this particular nature :)