| Reviews for Hiding In Plain Sight |
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veneciafm chapter 6 . 5/9/2019 Update soon! |
veneciafm chapter 7 . 4/26/2019 Update please! |
Guest chapter 7 . 4/19/2019 Love this chapter! |
Alalaes chapter 7 . 4/9/2019 Ahh this is so good, love the slow burn! Thanks for the update. |
Chinnus chapter 7 . 4/3/2019 I thought I had divergent behind me, but you hault me back in. Somehow, even tough it's been months since I've read the books, it's no less intriguing. Thank you! |
lokidoki9 chapter 7 . 3/31/2019 Hi! I was super excited to see this update, and it was still a great chapter even if you say there isn't much Eric :) I'm really interested in seeing how Charlotte tries to deal with her fears! Thanks for another great update! :D |
lucysunshine chapter 7 . 3/30/2019 Great chapter can't wait for next one . |
Unique16 chapter 7 . 3/29/2019 I love this |
Wynter Phoenix chapter 7 . 3/29/2019 Lovely chapter! |
Unique16 chapter 6 . 12/18/2018 Please continue the story. I love the character |
lokidoki9 chapter 6 . 12/13/2018 Hi! I only found this fic today so I have no idea what it was previous like, to be honest...but this is amazing! I love your way of writing and your characterisation is awesome! Thanks for sharing your work, I can't wait to see where it all goes :D |
howaboutno922 chapter 6 . 11/30/2018 I'm so damn loving this story! Its completely different from the other Eric stories that I've read and I just love it! I liked that you didn't immediately say what the characters' names were, it just added to the mystery of it and hooked me straight away. Are we going to get more about her family during the fear sims? I definitely need to know more! Also are you going to follow the divergent war or have no war? If you are, is Charlotte's sister going to be a part of the Erudite group that visits Dauntless? If you're not, I think she still needs to pop up somewhere just to get that sibling drama... Either way I ABSOLUTELY love this story... I don't know if you can tell... :) |
Killer Queen of Slytherin chapter 6 . 11/17/2018 I first read this story about 2 years ago. I distinctly remember that it stuck with me, more than any other divergent story has, simply because of the natural - almost professional - way it was written. It really got me invested in the story, and I was so disappointed that there wasn't more. Imagine my surprise when I randomly remember it 2 years later, and go to reread it... and see that a story that has been abandoned for years is back! I'm actually SO THRILLED. I still love this story, 2 years after discovering it, and I really really REALLY hope you update it again soon. No pressure, ofc, but it would make my entire week. :) thanks for the update! |
StephieDarcy chapter 6 . 11/10/2018 OMG! I just started reading this today and I'm in love with this story already I think it's written wonderfully and love the way that the relationship with Eric develops slowly. Please continue when you can! xx. |
emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl chapter 6 . 11/5/2018 Oh gosh. I love this story so much. It is super great! Omg. She is first ranked now. GUURL, WATCH YOUR BACK! i looove how her relationship with eric is developing. I love that it is an emotional connection rather than just lust |