You write beautifully! You depict Snape with great sympathy and depth, and I'm intrigued by the character of 'Honey.' I do hope you'll continue with this soon.

Cool. That I like. Honey's hilarious.

My God! This is delightful! I adore all the bird imagery surrounding Snape and your Honey is the most engaging, absolutely fascinating OC I've ever ran accross (and I hate OFCs with a passion. Normally, I'd rather read Snape/Hagrid)

Is there more? I sure hope so...

Mim

PS. That Grima/Faramir fic... I'm drooling already... Do you think you could mail me when you have it out? I'm a pervy Grima fancier.

well, admittedly, i had my doubts at first, but i was proved wrong. this is funny, it's unbelieveably wierd, but it has the quirkyness to pull it off, a great sucess. in the name of hitlers y fronts, write more!

This is a great beginning!

I can't believe I see a parrot as a Mary Sue! I laughed my head off. I hope you continue the story.

This is rather interesting, how about another chapter?