I am so pissed right now... I come back yo reread one of the best story I’ve ever read on this site, only to learn that the mating scene, the best mating scene I had ever read and that was SO MUCH MORE then a mating scene! It was bonding, it was learning more of the culture of that world you created... I can’t believe you had to take it all out! You had a M warning! I don’t understand why they got upset—!

Ok. Let’s get to the point instead. I really wish to reread this story. But I don’t want to read a censored version, it makes me feel like I’m missing so much stuff. Like I’m not actually reading your story, but just a ghost of it. I don’t usually beg, but I am begging you this time, if you can upload it on AO3, please do. Is your name Junichiblue there too? I would really like to reread it. But if you can’t there either... Then I’m gonna cry alone in a corner, but I’m not asking you to get in trouble, so yeah.

You have such a brilliant mind and you are so talented. You’re a gifted writer and put your heart and soul in your stories. I love them all. I love your work. I will keep following you, hopefully this won’t affect Five Minute Major or Into The Jaw (tho I don’t know if you wish to continue that one, but now that I think of it, I’ll go reread it).

I wish you a good day.

Naeme

Hello Nr.216195507233x Violater,
Your story violates the ToS (a.k.a rules [law])!
Take it down this instant!
Mary out.
Signed CU_ISFf

Hello Nr.080101601919x Violater,
Your story violates the ToS (a.k.a rules [law])!
Take it down this instant!
Mary out.
Signed CU_bIK9

Hello Nr.311665106422x Violater,
Your story violates the ToS (a.k.a rules [law])!
Take it down this instant!
Mary out.
Signed CU_vhTU

Hello Nr.114988129753x Violater,
Your story violates the ToS (a.k.a rules [law])!
Take it down this instant!
Mary out.
Signed CU_uEKQ

I didn’t even have to read the story and the author’s note on the first chapter got me convinced, so here I am. I think this mating scene is the most graphic and détaillés I have ever read... not that it’s a bad thing, it made me loose the notion of time, never knowing wether they you be finishing soon or continue... frolicking. They rest of the story too was so detailed that it felt as if the world started and ended at Grimm and Ichi... you know what I mean? In short, just wanted to say that I liked
Bye bye!

Plz write another book like this with the mating. It was brilliant!

awesome

This story need a SEQUEL NOW! T.T I WANT IT SO BAD!

There needs to be another one of these. This was so great. SEQUEL.

this is one of the best fics ever written N read. You definitely deserve a heartfelt encore. I love your stories, they are awesome!

This is a great story and I love this chappy. You illustrated the connection between grim and ichi well with your vonacular. I wish you would continue after this moment to the struggles and happy moments that may come from this intimate incounter

Okay, another fanfic that has left me speechless, Junichi!

I like stories like this, you know? about royalty and poverty. Grimmjow as a King, taking a new consort every night just for the promise he made to his dying father. Well, not only for that. Grimmjow, obviously, like to go to his room each night and find a different face to vent his frustrations. But as Urahara said: Grimm forgot the true purpose of having a consort sent to his room (hahaha, I loved how you to put him in this role). Urahara is eccentric, not afraid to say the things that his King must listen.

I knew that Grimmjow would be unable to force Ichigo to have sex with him. He is an arrogant, powerful king, but not a rapist. Although I was surprised that Grimm hit him. It might have been because he had just arrived from a battle, or because he was not used to getting 'no' for an answer. Whatever it was, and although Grimmjow is in his right to claim the first time of whoever he wants, I felt sorry for Ichigo.

But of course that Grimm would fall by the charms of Ichigo later! (that and what Urahara told him, hahaha). I was laughing so much when Ichigo used linens and towels to create a rope to take him down. And I'm sure Grimmjow liked his soon to be lover to be so... * sigh *

I loved the last chapter. Grimmjow suddenly softened, and why not? if he already had the battle won. Ichigo was in heat. In heat just for him. A few touches, nice words and Kurosaki would be his for the taking.

But I liked that Grimmjow was serious with him.
My favorite lines were:

"Tonight ... you will call me your King. And you will submit and take my seed. And for every night hereafter."
"I want you beside me, as my partner. You're my future. And I want to be yours."

Totally captivating.
Thanks for this, Junichi.

It was great as in realy.. but i gotta ask... whats with the last phrases at the end? XD i gotta say... it was a weird way to en the story XD just saying :3dont get mad w

nice :)