| Reviews for Devil of the sand |
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  ChibiMatatabi chapter 1 . 4/10/2018 the premise is quite interesting and i have seen similair storys attempt one or the other before unfortunately you seem to stumble in the execution, your writings some beta work, and your story itself could do with a bit more pacing... otherwise it is a quite enjoyable piece, and i look forward to any updates you post in the near to distant future |
 inuyasha16451 chapter 5 . 12/22/2017 Omg. Please please come back and update this awesome story soon. |
| reptoholic chapter 5 . 6/11/2017 Keep it up, though you HAVE to explain a senju when tsunade was the last. UNLESS this is a baby created by tsunade and dan's frozen sperm or one that died years ago and was brought back to life. The only other reason is if is tsunade in a younger form |
| reptoholic chapter 4 . 6/11/2017 AWESOME |
| reptoholic chapter 3 . 6/11/2017 GO TSU TSU |
| reptoholic chapter 2 . 6/11/2017 keep it up |
| reptoholic chapter 1 . 6/11/2017 WOW. hope he steals the iron form their blood to make him more powerful |
| jp236 chapter 5 . 3/16/2017 So far so good. You should definitely finish this. I would love to see where it goes |
| Banshee-024 chapter 1 . 12/15/2016 wow konoha full of bastard Just got what they deserved |
| Ahyah chapter 5 . 6/15/2016 Interesting... I can nitpick but I will not, I like what I have read thus far. |
| countrylovinfangirl chapter 5 . 7/17/2015 Amazing! I love it a lot! Please continue soon! |
| ShouldibedoingthisREDUX chapter 1 . 7/6/2015 For more this check out my new account... (i was looked out of this one)hdhdhdhd |
| DRAGON KING 142 chapter 5 . 5/1/2015 nice story don't stop. |
| strabimonx chapter 5 . 4/2/2015 Nice |
| maxgoof296 chapter 5 . 2/21/2015 Cool, can't wait for the next chapter |
