Awww, Tony...
Really great chapter!

Great clean fun! Love it!

Love the idea of this, Steve stumbled into a hostage situation and saving the day is just his fate, overbearing and protective Tony is still wonderfully snarky with a human sad side, Steve sketching on this travels is love (wished they elaborated more of this in canon actually), the image of Steve going to Disneyland does bring a smile on my face and can totally see him being completely overwhelmed by being in a parade :)

Ah that was a great story! Your writing just gets better and better as I move through the stories.

Aw this is so cute!

Oh man. This is absolute gold (as I find are all of your works). Steve on a road trip? It sounds simple enough for a plotline, but you've done wonders with this! The interaction between Steve, Tony, and the civilians are wonderful and I can't stop smiling.

I thought the conversation with the cows was going to take the prize in this chapter, but I was wrong. I'm just loving the road-trippyness of this all (that numb feeling in your butt after you get up off the bike seat after hours of riding, smell of leather, green things, and fuel, etc...). And then there's roadhouse action! So cool.

This chapter made me happy. I love to do stuff like this with my kids. Good for Steve. He needs some simple happy.

Love the actual list on dead trees comment.
He needs to sit down and sketch the sunset as it happens on Saturday night.
I like the solution that allows Steve to keep his pride but still protects him from screaming mobs of fans.
Yes, the prices are obscene. I've only been to WDW, not Disneyland, but I gasp at the price of bottled water. On the other hand, I can't stand the taste of the stuff coming out of the fountains, so just budget it as part of the trip.
NOTHING beats a eating chocolate/ice cream Mickey Bar on Main Street USA in the heat of the day. NOTHING. Well, except for the nighttime parade, the fireworks, my favorite attractions...
shutting up now. You need to write a story about Steve's actual visit to Disney as a stand alone. Combining Cap with Disney is this reader's dream come true.

This was a very story. You should write a bonus chapter about how Steve's day at Disneyland went.

Sounds like a pretty good deal, honestly.

Wait what? That's it? I wanna read Steve's adventure in Disney!

Loved it all the same. Something to take Tony's mind off of things, and build the relationship between him and Steve. I really liked that.

Grea job!

Loved it! Thanks for sharing!

Ha ha ha! Loved how you mixed your experiences into your story. :-D

There's one thing missing. You haven't had a Stan Lee cameo yet. (C'mon, even Phineas and Ferb had Stan the Man show up!)

You've just scarred me! My daughter and I will be in Disneyland next week and with the exchange rates what they are, I have a feeling Steve & I will both be shocked! But it is nice to know that even super heroes need a Disney break. :-)