why do you make naruto speak his mind and then have him be a coward? he spoke his mind to venelana and then turned around and wiped out which shows he has no conviction and that all he said were empty words with no true meaning

You act like if they even took him serious they would kill him easily. Naruto deadass would of kill mostly everyone if he went all out. But you have all these people saying that, if I didn’t underestimate him I would of kill this boy... that’s stupid because Naruto on his own is god level threat. But it’s your story

This is my 5 time reading this and am still interested and not bored of it

That was a great one my guy, but you never came back

Eh? If Rias wanted Naruto for herself technically she could ‘trade’ the equivalent pieces for Naruto. Granted this is only chapter two, for all I know you plan to do just that eventually. After all, Riser getting a Naruto-powered beatdown is satisfying as hell to read.

J'ai adoré le moment avec grayfia, j'adore ce personnage, dommage qu'il ne soit pas si présent que cela dans d autres histoires. J'espère qu'elle ne sera pas mise de côté

So any reason why Naruto seemingly turns into a complete piece of shit after 2 years in heaven? He legit gets handed a flyer for Rias' rating game for her marriage and he just goes 'thanks, I'll watch!"?

eh not really, my best friend is a girl who i have known for a long time and i know the difference between her flirting and so called 'over-kindness' because i know her for 13 years and been dating for about 4 years so i know very well when she sad or having some troubles and her behaviour before even dating

the man who fight god, with 9 God-tier beast inside of him, get mind controled

wth those bijus doing in there

Update bitch.

Oh, I see now, it's not rushed. I didn't realise there was a sequel. Whoops.

The story is feeling really rushed now.

I hope Naruto won't have much trouble in this. It really sucks how weak Naruto is in battle because he doesn't have his original memories. If he did, like that person from the beginning said, Naruto would be able to wipe the floor with every being in this universe.

At the start of the story you said that the 4th great ninja war made the war between angles, devils, and fallen angles look like childs play. Going off of that, with Naruto being brought into this DxD universe with Sasuke's power and powerful devil magic along with Ravels Phenox tears, combining that with his normal ninja power, sage mode, kyuubi mode, and 6 paths sage mode and 11 chakra releases, he could probably, like I said earlier, blow up and kill everyone without much resistance.

But, you have most likely nerfed him for plot. I dont have much a problem with this, he is still strong, just not as strong as you originally described him to be and how you are continously making him stornger.

Well, really I just can't read it. I hate Rias too much to read a fic where Naruto ends up with her. She doesn't deserve him and should just go with her pre-arranged marriage with Riser and then disappear from this story. Well, anyway I don't doubt I would have liked your story very much hadn't it been for her (and Akeno which happens to be my second most hated character in DxD).

Truthfully, you made a Naruto with great power. You made him part of Sirzechs' peerage (I would have prefered he stays human, but acceptable) and he has now great status. Can you tell me why the fuck did you want him to have anything to do with Rias ? She's the character I hate the most in the DxDverse. You really represented her perfectly. Egoistical, manipulatrice, forceful, sheltered... She intended to make him a member of her peerage with, or without his conscent, just so he could stay with her. You have such a nice premise, why do you include her ? You could have included my cute Millicas, but Rias... hmm !