I can’t believe there are reviewers who take issue with the smut here or find this somehow funny and acceptable. I personally feel that you missed a huge opportunity to have Draco and Hermione’s relationship blossom over time after she leaves Ron because he betted her like cattle. Also, Hermione is possibly the strongest (female) character in HP, so for you to turn her into some wallflower unable to hold her own against Ron or Draco is just disgusting and degrading. It shows what you really think of women. And of course, the icing on top of the cake has to be Draco making a reluctant Hermione so uncomfortable through his overt sexual advances that she sleeps with him. That’s not consent, that’s rape, and it is utterly disturbing that you and so many others don’t see it that way. This is only encouraging girls to enter and/or stay in toxic relationships where they are disrespected and treated as less than they are truly worth.

I'm a little confused by the ending...was she and Draco already together or was she the manipulator of the bet which is why he bet a car he didnt know anything about? Outside of that everything else was great!

So now it is funny and romantic to whore out your wife. Your moral compass needs readjusting.

Uhm... Infidelity is not really my thing. H married to R is so way out in my book (I hate JKRs epilogue), but having H cheating on R is even worse. Cheating isn't fun or romantic imo.

I couldn't get through this. Shes locked in and saying "No" repeatedly. That's rape. You didn't seem to be aware. The idea of this is a good one. Ron is stupid, Hermione is pissed and uses the date with Draco to piss him off more. No sex needed. You made it rape and tried to make it romantic? Nope.

Ron, you wanker

don't you think Hermione should break things off with her husband, who put her in a bet..even if she and Draco doesn't become a couple.

Sounds like Ron may have pushed Hermione away. Great story!

Yeah rons screwed. Great chapter!

i actually love this story how dare Ron bet on Hermione like that :(
if my hubby did that i would never forgive him :
although... i dont' think he would ever do that bc he loves me too much. awesome story :)

I am sad we did not to see Hermione hex Ron but I do hope that Draco and Hermione stay together. Wonderfully enjoyable 2 shot.

I see a divorce on Ron's horizon, after she blasts his bits off. lol

Part 3?! What happens!?

awesome

So rape is fine, women are something just to be bet away in a card game, and disrespect is fine, and this is somehow supposed to be "romantic" or "humor"?