| Reviews for Ashbell |
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N2 chapter 62 . 6/16 I would love to see a sequel. |
Pickles chapter 62 . 5/29 Thank you for the story! I’m dumb so I don’t think I know exactly where you wanted this to go, but from what I can tell it looks like a wild ride! I guess Kamito sent Restia and Est back through the Gap and he got to hang out with the otherworldly darkness for a decade? I dunno really, but this entire thing was really cool! I’ve followed this fic for I think 4 years now. It’s definitely been one of my favorites! |
Pickles chapter 61 . 5/29 Still adoring! And if this if your first try at a fanfic, you’ve done a great job. It’s much better than my first go anyhow |
Pickles chapter 60 . 5/29 Kamito returns! And so did you! Yeah the coronavirus has been wrecking my family too, one of my friends got sick and I can’t visit her :(. Thank you for the update. |
EvsVsz chapter 62 . 5/30 I was surprised to notice that this story started in 2014 but then I was even more surprised to notice that I had favorited it the same year months after you first posted it. Time flew so fast that I didn’t realized I had been reading for so long. I’m both sad and relieved to see it end, sad because it’s over (in an admittedly not favorable ending) and relieved that it had an ending because of the ridiculous amount of stories I’ve read that have been abandoned by their authors without any resolution leaving us readers hanging but still it’s a shame that this story is over considering there’s barely any Seirei Tsukai fanfics around let alone any of good quality ones like this story. It feels like I’m a completely different person from when I started reading this back in 2014 but this story was always the constant that allowed me to realize how much the difference is. Take care and good luck in the future. ~ A long time reader. |
GrumpyOnue chapter 61 . 5/30 Seirei tsukai no blade dance is my favorite story because I can pretend like girls other than Restia and Est doesn't exist they don't have a context or their personality things they do doesn't make any sense they are just trash. they are just a joke nothing more. Maybe Greyworth but author write things like she is just a npc who gives you a secret skill that's Greyworth what a shame. Most potantial carrying series have worst FUCKİNG characters dragon prince's team scarlet all of them ducking trash they don't needed at all they are just having random power up (Elstein flame, Fenrir, scarlet's true name taking power shit from kamito) when I read light novels I tough Rubia going to save the series she ducking become a brain dead worthless character. She thinks if kamito lost control FUCKİNG demon king he will directly attack otherworldly shit (OHJJJHH I CAN FEEL POWER BUT WAIT OF COURSE I AM NOT GOING TO ONE SHOT THE WORLD BESIDES I WILL ATTACK MAİN VILLAIN, MAKES SENSE RIGHT?) First I tough academy arc will be one volume kamito will search restia we will know what Kamito did in 3 years and a real romance BUT NO WE GOT a stupid main girl whipping and saying same thing no development at all then we saw a princess a Fallen one (MAYBE A DİFFRENCE, MAYBE NOVEL WILL BE SAVED) No not at all, just a princess who have psychological problem. If someone find romence and drama in this series and tell me which part and which volume I fucking hang myself My favorite series and IF someone can find a light novel with mc have a relationship with his sprit/swordsprit can pm me please? (it doesn't have to be a romence) And you dear author that was a good fanfic I enjoyed but I think you should do a another seirei fanfic maybe with Restia Est or OC it's really deserves |
GrumpyOnue chapter 62 . 5/30 Full kamito X Restia story? |
CreepySnake chapter 62 . 5/30 I just want to thank you, for writing such a massive story and finishing it in an archive largely unpopular, and a story which most may have forgotten about. This was one of the first fanfictions I ever read and I'm glad to see it fins an ending. It was a journey but it was one truly worth the effort. |
RedSS chapter 62 . 5/30 Well, I'll be onest here. It wasn't the best fanfic. Not by a long shot. But it was one of my favorites, if not my most favorite. This fanfic has accompanied me since at least 2016 (probably longer, since I hadn't started to use the fav and follow option untill then). Whenever I felt down, I came back to reading this. It helped me carry throught my last 2 years in highschool and my first year in college, especially when things weren't good (like first semester of college last year or my whole last year of highschool) or when they were just plain bad (second semester I experienced a personal crisis, a family crisis and a country-wide social crisis (yeah, I'm from Chile)), yet this helped me keep going. Weird, as it wasn't the better one out there, but it just kept me coming back here, in search of a good laugh, some emotion, a bit of relaxation of some tension. I'm positive I'll keep coming back here, re-reading the same lines over and over again. About the ending, well... I really liked the fights between the peopoe we all know and meet, both in the canon and in this fanfic. The final fight was a bit of a surprised, I'll admit I almost threw a tantrum at it, untill I saw the "alternative final" or whatever you called it. Even still, concerning both that and the teaser of the next part you won't do, I'm not picking everything up: not your fault, I wasn't always the brightiest of people. I'll probably check others guesses about them. I'll even just created my own head-canon for it and wait for someone to pick up the story, if it ever happens. Anyway, a final it is and what a finale it was. I'll be forever thankfull of this fanfic and your commitment to do it, even when you thought you couldn't or didn't want to. I dount if there is even a way to really pay back what you made for this with this story, so I hope you'll be satisfied with an honest and sincere review. STnBD will also have a space in my heart, as it stayed with me during most of my troubled times (since it was aired and I comited to reading the novels somewhere around 2014, something I'll admit still haven't finished), and, well, I kinda hope this sent a smile to your face at least (though is partly hapoy and partly sad, maybe? Dunno, never been a person of emotions myself). Maybe we'll meet later, maybe don't. Who knows? Well, certainly not me nor you. Either way, with that said, and feeling I haven't said all the things I wanted to say but not knowing what could be missing, I'll be taking my leave. Waving it's hand maybe a final time for this one, Red-y-Yelllow/Red Otonashi/RedSS (names I've used or I'm using right now, may have forgotten some of them,) But, above all and since the beggining: A simple and random internet user. |
vercingetorix2 chapter 62 . 5/30 This is one of the first fanfic ever since I stumbled upon fanfiction and one of the best fanfic I've ever read, thank you for everything and wish you luck |
RayneTDX chapter 62 . 5/29 Man, that had been a good 6 years. I still remember this as the only good fanfic on STNBD. Now that the LN ended, I kinda miss this story. Thank you for everything, from the funny scenes to the somewhat emotional scene of the reunion between Milla and Kamito. Everything about this story had been great. I am kind of sad about the ending to this fanfic, though I can understand the lack of motivation that resulted in the said ending. From one fanfic writer to the other, time is really too little and we barely have much time to juggle everything on our plate. I am looking forward to Kazehaya, though I am still trying to figure out what's happening in the story. So as a final (dreadfully wrong) guess, lemme try and break down the ending. So Kamito Kazehaya and Ren Ashbell are 2 different people now, probably due to his escape from the Void which he was sent to by the Otherworldly Darkness. I am still curious about the true identity of the Otherworldly Darkness, seeing as it was what gave an enraged Kamito pause. If I were to guess, assuming that the Otherworldly Darkness is true dead in your part 1, I would say that Restia Ashdoll, trying to escape from the Void, cut herself into 2 pieces to fit in the mending hole. One was Ren Ashbell, the other is Kamito Kazehaya. Since Restia Ashdoll has 2 personalities, 3 counting Ren Ashdoll, I would assume one of the personalities happen to be inside of Kazehaya. So now, with a Blade Dance coming up and the reward being an audience with the Queen, Ren Ashbell, I would say that Kazehaya is trying to assimilate with Ashbell, so that they would become whole again. That, or I am an idiot (most likely) and couldn't see the big picture. Theorycrafting aside, it was fun. Can't wait to see your other works. Should you ever need help regarding Fate stuff or even your Kazehaya hit me up. Now, excuse me while I read the final few volumes of STNBD. I have been holding off for too long and quarantine hasn't been exactly free for me to do what I want. |
PickledCucumbers chapter 62 . 5/29 Thank you so much for writing this. It's been a great four years for me. |
Hiroshi Rein chapter 62 . 5/29 I will always remember this story for being the first fanfic i read in english and following it during this years, excelent job dude. You are the best c: |
LockeBelmont chapter 62 . 5/29 Thanks for the ride, it was awesome! |
Qrow454 chapter 61 . 5/29 RIP Ashbell. You were truly a source of amusement. Although the last few chapters confused me. Glad to see a long fic have an ending. |