Reviews for Tempered In the Fire of Your Eyes
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 6/21/2016
Plausible. I like it. (Better than I liked the movie, which was a Compendium of How to Do Bad Casting. I mean, SERIOUSLY? Kristen freaking Stewart is supposed to be "fairest in the land"? Fairer than CHARLIZE THERON? Whose balls got fondled to land her THAT part?)

Hayden Panettiere? Sure. Willa Holland? Yeah, I'll go with that. Candace King? She'd have to dye her hair black, but ... DAMN, she'd make a fine Snow White! Kaya Scodelario? Yep. Emilia Clarke could pull it off.
The list goes on:
Melissa Benoist
Chloe Bridges (drool)
Ashley Benson (see above c0mment re: Candace King)
Nina Dobrev (hell, she wouldn't even need makeup!)
Sarah Hyland
Emma Roberts
Ginny Gardner (on the strength of her amazing eyes alone ... heck, for that matter, she could play a credible Elsa)
Amanda Seyfried (pant-pant-pant)
Victoria Justice (also no need for makeup, 'cause DAMN)
Bella Thorne
Emma Watson (lets NOT pigeonhole the girl)
Chloƫ Grace Moretz
Analeigh Tipton (again with the eyes!)

Any of these gorgeous women could be considered, under most circumstances, to be "fairer" than Charlize. But Stewart? STEWART?! She's got ONE FACIAL EXPRESSION, for cryin' out loud! She's like this generation's Keanu Reeves.

Ommmmmmm ... Ommmmmmm ... Ommmmmmm ...

Okay, calm achieved. And all that beyotching aside, I liked YOUR story a lot. Damaged people making the best of a damaged situation.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/2/2016
So awesome! Fave fic, loved it :)
Nolesr1 chapter 1 . 12/20/2014
This was adorable!
grk.llk2808 chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
I like it ;-) hoping for more soon.
x beautifully broken x chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
love it i wish there was more
Though in my opinion I loved William more than the Huntsman. But this is a amazing story that works and fits the characters nicely.
So I applaud you for that.