i did it i said all the names in one breth i passed out after but you know fun is fun

~red delta

Oh wow! Can't wait to see- I mean 'read' on what happens next. Never touch Yang's hair especially cut it.
I wonder what those creepy stalkers would do (the ones that cut off a bit of the person's hair and puts it in a locket or even worst, they continuously smell it). Okay, I watch too much TV.
Really cool story by the way, I shall look forward to the next chapter

Hey, I like your story so far, and if you ever need an OC, you can use mine, which you can find by looking at the only fanfic I've written at this point in time, it's actually just his Bio. Also, if you use him, you'll have to create a team for him or find other people to do so, as I have not created one for him. Sorry about all the rambling, but I just kind of wanted to see somebody use my OC in their story, since I'm not very good at coming up with plots myself

That baker's dozen reference from the let's plays in mincraft

Hahahahaha. Yang busting into Owen's house, hilarious!

In all seriousness, it's really good to see this story back!

Please, God, update this soon! I can't believe I didn't find this earlier but dammit, I'm addicted!

Love the OC's, love the backstories. I love EVERYTHING!

Look at me, I'm like the internet equivalent of Nora at the moment. I'm Nora and this story is my Sloth... good Sloth...

Sorry, that got away from me for a second. But seriously, I can't wait!

This is great and I can't wait to see the next chapter

An interesting fic with a lot of potential.
Hope you keep this till the end because promise a lot

When I read the description of the book steffen was reading i instantly thought way of shadows, night angel trilogy x)

Glad you actually described how your OC's looked like. So many writers forget to give details on there OC team that it is just very difficult to imagine the characters. Anyways I like the future team they seem like a fun bunch.