Um was this abandoned, on hiatus, or just forgotten about it? Please update soon

Damn dude, what's up with you and Weiss? I agree that she isn't exactly the most likable character, but... the antagonism is REAL. Anyway, one again the only problems I've found are underdevelopment and typos. Perhaps a second pair of eyes would help catch these, someone you trust IRL. Other than that, very compelling story! Hopefully you finish it up!

Dear Mr. Shadow, do you hope to escape and survive on your own after killing MacAllen? The IMC and the Milita will be hunting you down and kill you enforce. I hope you can survive on your and my other colleagues, a German and a Russian hope that you survive. If you do the Russian will do a toaste in your favor with tons of Russian Vodka and the German hopes he can use his Tiger and tell his troops to "Load Ze panzershreks" and use Spyglass as a target practice. Goodbye, Spartan-017
P.S. Um uh do you still accept OC's for this fic or not?

Dear shadow did you meet new people while you were out spying and getting supplies in Titan armor

come on dude please finish the story

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...A little over-angsty on that last bit. He tried to kill himself...because someone he doesn't care about...told him...that his previously deceased family...deserved to die? Because he was drinking underage? Somebody got anger issues!
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The Titan fights make no sense. Sure, Stryders are weaker than Ogres, and their punches are a little weaker, but I think when you have two Atlas' and two Stryders on a single Ogre...in game, Shadow would've been obliterated in seconds. Based on your logic, Pyrrha's plasma railgun would've been able to puncture the entirety of the ogre's shields and take 1/8 of the hull integrity. Then the quad rocket would weaken it to a point where the chain guns would do the rest. 4 on 1 is an impossible task. Regardless of how angry he gets.
That last "I SNAPPED" bit seemed a little weird, I mean he seemed a little over the top. I get he's sad, but you don't scream at a superior officer. Period. Also, where in the timeline is this set? MacAllan dies on the second-to-last mission, and Spyglass doesn't take command until Graves defects one mission later.

Am I the only person who played Titanfall and enjoyed playing as the IMC more than the Militia?

I'm guessing Cardin's in the white one, then?

Jam a pen in someone's neck. Did you get that idea from Whack your Boss?

Well tht one way to die

So MacAllan is dead, its his own fault he died not to mention that he bled out faster once he removed the pen from his neck. great chapter.

i'll say it again full metal jacket