| Reviews for Appetite for Destruction |
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   TylerSoze chapter 4 . 5/12 are you rewriting this story? |
| Anna chapter 4 . 3/22 Please just keep writing !This story is amazing! |
| SavageViper chapter 1 . 8/28/2019 I see the author of this fic is a fan of Powerwolf, or perhaps of Gary Moore, as James quoted the opening lines of the song "Out In The Fields" in chapter three. Also the discription saying "Trust is a scarce commodity and Death Is Just A Heartbeat Away." |
| notYacob chapter 1 . 8/7/2019 The wand length is "Twelve and one hundred and twenty five inches"? I don't think a stick 11 feet or 3.35 meters long is easy to swing around. |
| kusvlin chapter 1 . 8/4/2019 wtf is this trash fucking faggot |
| manglor dejavan chapter 1 . 5/3/2019 excellent story r u still alive? |
| nikprosta chapter 2 . 4/17/2019 This is good, PLEASE tell me you havent abandoned thiS?! |
| NakedGrizz chapter 4 . 3/20/2019 There's a ton I want to know more about in your story. I really hope it's not dead. I'm pretty confused by the path Harry and Bella will end up taking, and I'm very unsure how you get them interested in each other, but I hope you can find your muse so we can learn the answers to those questions! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/12/2019 Pleas update this story its one of mi favorites |
| Sesu13 chapter 4 . 12/30/2018 This story is great, I hope you will update it ! I spent a great time reading these 4 chapters I hope you'll answer me Sesu ~ |
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/28/2018 Good |
| ThePeverellEmperor chapter 4 . 9/17/2018 Good story just a few issues. The battles are too long for one. Another issue that a lot of people do in their stories is they let the main character go along with whatever misunderstandings there are. Harry could have yelled out that he's not from this world. Even if Dumbledore didnt believe him the seeds of doubt would have been planted, especially because he's far more powerful than his "evil counterpart. Misunderstandings are fine but when the entire story is just one big misunderstanding and its the main plot device, it gets kind of annoying. The plot isn't going anywhere. Another thing is that you stop writing every story you make that is novel length. Either finish a work or don't bother with it at all. Its unfortune because you have a gift I'm writing that is almost progidal compared to the rest of the writers on this site. I doubt you'll see this but in case you do, the writing is good but I wish you had continued |
| magicdft chapter 4 . 8/30/2018 It is a halfway decent story but I feel it would be better if there was more story and less super dawn out fight scenes |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/10/2018 I think it's pretty stupid to change the nature of your story halfway through. Your Harry is clearly a grey/pragmatic magic user, in fact your world in general is leaning that way, or did I imagine James using the killing curse? Seriously, don't try and change halfway through. |
| FirePhoenixofHogwarts chapter 4 . 6/20/2018 Why do you start a story and never finish it? You got 126 chapters left to write. Back to work . Now. |
