Very good. I liked the sex scene.

all great but i think the guards manners where way out of the line even tywin would have done something about it caus ofc only he can make fun of a Lannister.

more plz

I really like this story! I like how you show how cruel tywin and Joffrey are. I thought it was cute how sansa told tyrion how she only pictured him. I do wish her first time was a bit more enjoyable but I'm hoping the next time they are in the marriage bed it will be and that sansa grows to see him as more then an Allie and more like a husband. Hope you update soon.

Please update soon

Wonderful fic with my fav pairing. I'm hoping Tywin at least sends them to Casterly Rock to escape bastard Joffery

very good chapter!

great chapter,i hate joffrey.

great chapter!

Love this!

update soon,please.

I love this, and never get sick of reading this. I don't mind if you don't want to continue this, but I just want to say, this is AMAZING. You're SUPER talented!
You explore themes like irony really, REALLY well. My goodness, this is just amazing overall - I genuinely can't find any errors in it. It's just so... beautiful. Okay, I'm gushing now, but I'm basically saying this is amazing, everyone's in character... ah! I love it.

More?

love the entire story! love your writing and the dialogues! keep it up!

Okayyyy... there's rape (or at least dubious consent, rape might not be the best word) in this scene! You kept Jaime in character, as he did do almost that exact same thing on the show, so great writing. Not really my favorite subject matter, but it was good writing. On a brighter note, love Tyrion/Sansa. They are such a great couple! You write Tyrion perfectly! You deserve bajillions of reviews! Love the story! Keep updating!