This is lovely. I think it's one of the best MM and Emma stories I have read, MM is excellent. She understands as a woman and mom and there's no judgment. Killian is excellent too, following Emma's lead without complaint, willing to do whatever she asks. While Emma prepares for the first real healthy relationship she has had in a long time. Very nice, thank you for writing.

omggggg I love it!

awwwwww. real sweet

Haha, that was brilliant. I love the analogy. :)

I loved this fic. It was such an interesting concept and something that really fit Emma as a character, I found. Great job!

This is beautiful and lovely and perfect.

Very nice. :-)

God this is like the second time I've read this and I fall in love with it even more. It's like it's even better the second time around! I seriously love the Mama Snow and Emma moments. You write them perfectly. And CAPTAIN SWAN OH MY FEELS. I love this!

Very nice. This was a beautiful story and a clever concept. I also think your characterization of Emma, Hook and Mary Margaret was spot on.

I loved this. Brilliant premise with the grief stages, and very well-employed, almost in a tongue-in-cheek sort of way. I loved how this could almost be a scene from the show itself - you were spot on with the characters. This left me wanting to cheer. Hope to see more Captain Swan from you down the road xx

This one was just adorable! I hope the show actually gives us some scenes like you have of the growing pains involved with Emma and Killian embarking on a relationship together. They both have scars, and a lot of history, and are used to going it alone - so there will definitely be hiccups, like you have illustrated so well here. Again, I think you have nailed Emma perfectly: she's already in so much deeper than she wants to admit. I liked Snow so much in this; sometimes on the show she can push too hard or seem to be nudging Emma in the direction she thinks best, but in this she is a lovely mix of Emma's friend Mary Margaret and her newfound mother. I loved Emma finally vowing to Killian at the end that she want to try - but my favorite bit was Killian (shirtless) in the kitchen trying and failing to make pancakes. That's quite the entertaining and adorable mental image! :)

Love!

Good writing. Very plausible.

AWWWWWWW! This was so cute! luv this! :) 3

loved it