i enjoyed this story... not sure how i feel about Carlisle tho...

I loved this. I especially loved how jacob and Edward got together in the end.

Lol i just can't hate jacob, i rather see Edward and him together they are too cute together.

Darn, I wasn't expecting this to be the end.

Hmmm... Edward didn't tell Carlisle about Jacob's threat to call the police...

I found this beautiful story today and finished it tonight. I love the character growth of Jacob and Edward. Still don't get what was Carlise's issues. I started out cheering for Dr. C but he became a wack job and very irresponsible for a mature man. How is Esme going to deal with his hangups. Disappointed with Edward's mother she just didn't know how to balance work and being present for her only child. Truly enjoyed the journey. Thank you.

Awww I totally was rooting for Jacob and Edward! It such is a rocky road ahead of them but ahhhhh I just love them! :* congrats on a fantastic story :)

Oh I love the end, it was sweet. Great job! :-)

I honestly loved the ending ...

Wow Edwards doing a Bella here ...well almost ..hope you continue...though am all for Edward Jake...this one seems really interesting

Wow, I really live your Jake. I think he is exactly what Edward needs, he just needs to give home time to get his shit together.

OMG what the hell is Edward thinking?

That was sooo much better :)

That was bitter sweet, I just cant see Carlisle being so rough especially after he had been so sweet and tender with Edward. However Edward is fine with the outcome of their first sexual encounter, so I will read on. Thank you for sharing with us.

At least Edward was honest. See you next chapter.