Interesting start to this story, keep it up, love it so far, poor moka mistress maybe lol

The story is somewhat decent, pretty good plot. My biggest problem is the total lack of any sort of grammar/punctuation/proper english. Where are the quotation marks to show that a selection of words are actually a statement?

Where are the paragraphs to help things flow smoothly instead of starting a new line each and every time?

I mean really, try writing this same story with proper grammar and it'd be very good quality.

I think that Kokoa going out with Tsukune is kind of cute because she is very beautiful even though she is younger but how will Moka deal with this.

The fight was great and i ship TsukuneXKokoalol I loved it

Can you update quickly

all i have to say is please put more of the middle school story, and this story isn't even about prom anymore

love the story but kokoa seems really weak and out of character, still it's a good story

Please update soon ok

This story seems really good so far

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KOKOA AND TSUKUNE SUCK AS A COUPLE

Good Stuff. Keep up the story.