Poor mac would be whipped if he is not carefull. I hope your still writing this nice little story.

Mac is so hot.

I swear, this story gets better by the chapter. I love Ziva and Mac together gaaaahhh!

Thanks for mentioning me on your Chapter 3 end notes, darling! You'll have my support always. I'm a Red Canyon/TWD fan for life. XOXOX

Again, this story just keeps getting better and better with each chapter and I fucking LOVE it! Nothing's better than a story that keeps you wanting more and I DEFINITELY want more!

Loved that we got more background on Chaz and Wick at the beginning of the chapter. And as I've said before, I absolutely loved their's and Dahlia's relationship. And the scene with them arguing, DEFINITELY sums up what happens when two alpha males share one girl, so you got that one on-point! I'm hoping their relationship doesn't change ever, because the 3 of them are my favorite to read, believe it or not. I still love Mac and Zina but you have made me fall in love with those 3! ;) And of course, that smutty scene with them was amazing as always. I don't know how you do it, girl! You're smexy scenes are just so fun to read and always makes me need a cold shower afterwards. ;)

And I liked the scene where we got to know a little more about Dahlia too. Well, mostly her family. But still, I loved the background you gave her character. It definitely makes things even more interesting and I'm excited to get to know more.

As for Mac and Zina's scene...they are just fucking HILARIOUS! xD I had so much fun reading that scene! I had NO idea what to expect and that's the best part! Their "relationship" and the fact that they don't put up with each other's shit, makes it THAT much better. Like I said before, they are just perfectly matched and I'm psyched to read more of them!

And I forgot to mention in my previous review, but I would LOVE to read one of your Michael Myers stories! Like I mentioned before in one of our messages, I've already been reading Halloween stories and I would absolutely LOVE if you published your stories for it! Hell, to be completely honest, ANY story you write, I'd be ALL in. Your writing is just AMAZING and no matter what the story is about, I'd still read it. :)

And again, thanks for the mention at the end. It's really sweet of you and I feel kinda special being mentioned. lol Thank YOU though for taking the time out of your busy life to write these chapters for us readers! It's definitely a good break from life, for me. Nothing like a well-written, smut filled story with an awesome plot to get my mind off of school and work. :) I'm glad to be able to call you my friend as well.

God DAMN! I really can NOT find the right words to describe your stories. It's seriously THAT good that I have no words for it! lol I'm really loving this story so far. Happy we got to learn more about Dahlia too. It just gets more and more interesting, each chapter. And have I mentioned how much I love her, Chaz, and Wick's relationship? Cause I do. A-fucking-lot! I just love how she's not ashamed to show off her men and that she belongs to them, and vice versa.

Like I said before, the characters you write are everything I look for in the OCs I love to read about. And, not gonna lie, their attitude reminds me of myself at time, so that's what makes it even better! ;) Excited for when Ziva and Dahlia meet each other. I'm sure we'll get LOTS of fun chapters with those two. I just feel like they'd be up to no good. lol

As for Ziva and Mac's scene...phew. No words, once again. As I said before, I'm sure we're gonna have LOTS of fun reading about those two and their developing...relationship. That scene was DAMN hot though! Even if he was only partially naked, it was still a good fucking read. ;) Besides, I'm sure we'll be getting more naked Mac in future chapter anyway, right? haha

And I forgot to mention in the last review; thank you so much for that note at the end! It was really nice. :) And I feel special to be included in the whole "thank you notes" thing. I'm glad we're friends too! Keep up the awesome work. This story just keeps getting better and better with each chapter!

Damn. This chapter was just as mind-blowing as the first time I read over it. Sexy and hot don't even come CLOSE to describing this chapter. What a way to begin this story!

I especially loved Wick, Chaz, and Dahlia. I'm excited to read more about those three. ;) 2 guys sharing 1 girl was always a guilty pleasure of mine, ESPECIALLY when the guys are as sexy as Chaz and Wick. Which is why I loved the movie Savages when you recommended it to me, haha.

And I absolutely loved Ziva's attitude. You outdid yourself again with these characters! How you portray them are EXACTLY what I love to read in an OC story. ;) Her and Mac are gonna be VERY fun to read. She matches him perfectly.

As I said before, I always loved how you wrote our your OCs. The attitude, the personality, the sexiness...all perfect. I'm SO happy you're back to writing and I'm so excited to read more! Keep up the awesome work. Don't doubt it for a second because you are doing awesome. ;)

(This is MrsGooglyBear, btw. Thought it was about time to change my penname, haha.)

Well, You KNOW that I fuckin' LOVE this story as you've had pages and pages of our usual feedback for this chapter. I just wanna thank you AGAIN for giving me my man and lending me your, Wick. TWO amazing men all to myself? You spoil me! Thought it was about time I got my ass in gear and posted on here for you. I love the boys, Devon is a prick yes, we all know that. I LOVE your OC's sass with Mac. Think he's met his match in this one ;)

You KNOW after hours and hours of talking yesterday that I didn't manage to read through all of the second chapter... we kinda got a little side tracked lol. I PROMISE, I will get to finishing it as soon as I can. You know I shall review both on here and our usual way. ;) Love ya!

P.S Sorry I didn't get to review on here before!

Wha? Thas' it? O.o

Well that was one hell of a start. I'm gonna have to read through again just to make sure I got it all. I cannot wait for more.
Cheers

I've never seen a triad relationship done in a RC fic before (considering I haven't read any fics besides this one in probably half a year) and it was a very welcomed surprise! Loved the sarcastic play-fight banter between the boys. And you gave us threesome smut in the very first chapter! Could you spoil the readers any more? XD The names you came up with for Mac's different kinds of meth were fun, I almost wanted to have a bloody mary after reading that. I never thought of naming the meth my OC makes before reading this so thank you for that inspiration. Not many badass names you can come up with for pink meth though lol. The dialogue and mind games between Ziva and Mac were entertaining. And the Mac name plays, XD I did that with Krystal intoxicated and only came up with a few to use. I was impressed with mackintosh mackerel and macadamia, applause for thinking outside the box! I like the style you're going for with the separate storylines too. It looks like you've gotten a great start! I'll message you with a couple more opinions after I'm done here. And thank you for the shoutout :)