. i just want give Sho more shock like seeing Cain kissing before he know that is Kyoko and Tsuruga .

but she is actually in love with ren tho hehehe

Hmmmm... interesting. :)

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! I LOVE IT! I. Love. It. Leaf feather 2, you just made my day!
From: Pew! Witness. Witness. Witness. *Points finger gun at self* Witness.

Yay! You finished it! This is great! I'm actually working on a Skip Beat fan-fic as well! You inspired me!

Yup, I'm posting again. When I first started reading this story, I thought to myself "WOW, this person sure can put down words extremely well." Now that I've read your profile, and know you are only 13, I find it even more amazing. (Hence another review post)

I like this very much. I was sad that Murasame didn't get a bit part though. I can see Sho being more violent after he found out their identities, than he was trying to go after Setsu. The only thing that bothers me about this version of Sho though, I don't think he knows how to chase women. He's too used to women chasing him, he's never had to go after one on his own.