| Reviews for Luffy: Disciple of Jinbei |
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   Lucky Lucy Heart chapter 2 . 7/9/2019 PLEASE UPDATE! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story! The plot is AWESOME and your writing is AMAZING! I can’t wait to read the next chapter and I hope you upload it SOON! |
| bloodlinenaruto chapter 1 . 12/21/2017 I am very interested in this fanfiction and dracule D luffy please update them soon |
| arinasution5 chapter 2 . 9/24/2016 Great |
| kia the fox chapter 2 . 8/15/2016 More? |
| doubledamn chapter 2 . 4/20/2016 I'm liking this. I remember getting a email from you saying that you going to work on this but I had no idea it was up. Really good so far, would be interesting to see some work with water density and weapon creation similar to the Admirals. I really look forward to the Arlong Park arc. and hope you include this as an omake - Luffy meets Arlong, and defeats him by using a den den mushi to call Arlong's sister and then have Arlong just chewed out over the phone. |
| Psiivmeodlqndndkcibiash chapter 2 . 2/16/2016 ᔕO ᖴᗩᖇ ᗩ ᖇEᗩᒪᒪY IᑎTEᖇEᔕTIᑎG ᖴᗩᗷᖇIᑕ I ᕼOᑭE YOᑌ ᑌᑭᗪᗩTE ᔕOOᑎ. |
| nicholas.souddress chapter 2 . 12/26/2015 Holy shit. ...give me more... I can't find a single thing to give constructive criticism on however I can give you advice for the marineFord, with Ace as prisoner my advice instead of ace jumping in the way of the punch have Luffy fire a continuous missile of water to turn the Admiral into Earth as essentially Luffy's devil fruit perfectly counters that Admiral on the other hand if the Admiral does land punch Luffy turns into a statue. |
| ethan.lukkar chapter 2 . 11/21/2015 Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon. |
| david.teague.3950 chapter 1 . 9/18/2015 You must be a Lubin shipper of the two stories of yours that I've read that's all I see are Luffy and Robin, doesn't Nami deserve some love? Or are you gonna pair her up with the eternal coward Usopp?(I'm teasing you Btw as I really don't mind Robin the only aspect of her design that I find weird is her nose. I mean it was a cute little button of a nose as a child but now that she's older it's more prominent. |
| Shadow of God chapter 1 . 8/22/2015 Are you going to pick and choose what moments physical acts of agression will affect luffy? Cus unless the bandits used seastone I don't see the whole stepping on his head thing working. And making too. How is she of all people able to hit him when shanks friendly pat made him splash? |
| dragonlily22 chapter 2 . 6/5/2015 Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update THIS, and your OTHER stories, again SOON! Thank you! |
| Xerzo LotCN chapter 2 . 6/5/2015 well i look forward to it |
| quirkybread chapter 2 . 6/4/2015 Looking forward to the marathon |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/31/2015 Please don't forget about SubZeroPirates It's my favorite :3 Love Ya ! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/31/2015 Yay ! Sempai is back ! :) |
