Hello, I just wished for you to know that your story is fantastic. You speak as one who has truly visited the hallowed depths of Helheim. Continue to spread beauty and allow others to recognize the beauty of the natural cycle.

Wonderful. Poetic and I love the emphasis on how death brings new life.

Such a stirring and breathtaking story. I adore it!

Really, a perfect little persepctive of Hel's first descent into the land of the dead.

Bravo! *claps wildly*

YOU ARE TOO AWESOME.
"The cool, crisp smell of starlight."
I WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE YOU. All my stories are more or less goofy; I envy your ability to write seriously.
Thanks for writing. This was stellar as usual.

Wow...one of the best verisons of Hell I've read.
Thank you for writting.
Motherofthehorde

So beautiful. I'd never heard that story before. But your writing style is so heavy and rich, I just sank into it. Thanks for writing this.

I just love your writing style. It's so incredibly graceful and flowing

This is great! I love it!

Nice. That is really good (I love Norse Myths)

P.S. Is Loki Thor's brother not Odin's brother?