This was really bittersweet, and I really like your prose. Well done, even though it was short (less than a thousand words) it was chock full of meaning. :)

I love it! I realy ship these two. Where is part 2?

me gusta yo también amo a esta pareja

I wish this had a second luv it soo much

Heart wrenching. Truly. But very well written, as always.

:3 awwww es bellisimo.

so sad...God bless

I love your comparisons. Very beautiful writing and banter.

Wonderful! More of this pairing, it's just perfect!

This so beautiful! Short and sweet, this is striking. Nice job!

Too good, I want to cry. :'(

Of course you have next story? I really hope to read next chapter soon

OhMyGod is there going to be a second chapter to this?! I WOULD LOVE THAT AND I LOVE YOUR STUFF

I did like that a lot, especially how you portrayed their conversations with each other. The playfulness just got me, and I thought Diaval was done wonderfully. You got his pride, sharp wit and humanity balanced wonderfully; and Maleficent wasn't completely cold or ridiculously sappy, as in many other fics. Loved it. Would love more. Keep on writing!

'... Her heart still lingered with another.' Ouch, that hurts.
Please continue. This dream fantasy is just awesome.