I had high hopes. The story is moving way too quickly and I've just started. There's no plot. It's basically just a smut fic, which is perfectly fine. Just sucks there's tons of chapters to something that should be a one shot.

Awesome

Yeah some suspense and hopefully some violence ahead

I'm not complaining about the love scenes mind you but will we be expecting more of a storyline? More excitement, violence, adventure? Please update soon :)

3

3 Fabulous 3

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee

I want more please update soon

Selena and are so cute together and he treats her well. Please update soon

Very good

Cute and exciting. I can't wait for the cliffhanger to be revealed :-)

i like it!

Ohhhh... a cliffy. Please update again soon!

Hello,
Awww, this was just an absolutely beautiful chapter - and, as a chocoholic, and lover of making chocolates, this was fabulous!
I loved how Eric is soooo adorable, and something so simple, with strawberries, makes it fun, enticing, and more flirtatious. This is one scene that I would really dream of - a romantic guy wanting to do this, and having fun with me this way. It is innocent, but conveys playfulness and love. I guess I am a typical romantic! - and there is nothing wrong with that!
This whole scene was simply perfect. Selena and Eric are a perfect couple, and completely in love and smitten with each other. Just one thing, please can I lick the chocolate from the bowl?!
I cant wait to read more. This is one of my top favourite stories, and I just love it.
Take care xx

Hello,
Awww this was such a cute and sweet chapter!
I wonder why Bill showed up? Was he making sure Selena was safe? I hope he does not want to harm or take her from Eric.
Eric adores Selena - I love it! I love how he has a big book full of pictures of her. I know it may spook some people out, but it shows he has always been there, looking over her, like a guardian angel. He loves her. He treats her like a Princess.
Wow. The way you described the dressing room reminded me of the first Sex and the City film, where Carrie sees her new dressing room - it is beautiful. I like Pam, and the shoes - wow!
He he, awww Selena reminds me of me, baking and making chocolate! Hmmm, i wonder if Selena and Eric are going to bake, or make chocolate? Awww that would be sooooo perfect.
As you can tell, I am smitten with this story. Eric and Selena are totally in love, and he is a gentleman. He kisses her, gives her her own big and beautiful room, and wants to cherish her.
I wonder what happened to Jenna? Could she be looking after her now, after all these years, as a cook and Housekeeper, employed by Eric?
I cant wait to read what happens next! I just love this story.
Take care xx