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Knew it had to do with his clothes

I liked that you included so many of the characters, though I must admit it alarmed me to hear sex sounds compared to 'a noise that sounded like a pregnant women giving birth.'

Wow. I loved it! Any excuse for shameless Malec smut is fine with me! w

so funny, djfjfj i love it. Magnus is the bottom? Ddjjdjdjd What a surprise... thanks xx

I loved it! Great job!