Why did you stop? More chapters please!

Love this

first of all, in Asia, typically Korea and Japan, its really rude and extremely wrong to call your elder 'baka' or informally. Naruto is too cocky and his behavior is so unattractive. When a junior calls you 'baka' you have the right to call them a 'fucking bitch' or even slap them. Its that rude. Think about it, would you call your grandfather or an elder an 'idiot'? Naruto grew up with Madara and Zetsu, did they even teach him any manners? I find it funny how the girls find him pleasant and attractive. I'm a girl and I hate Naruto's character here, its worse than Kurotsuchi's here. He took disrespect to an whole other level.

Naruto is cocky as fuck it aint even funny. half the guys here are jerks. Naruto is just a crazy blood lusting maniac who only likes girls.

He goes from feeling contempt towards Konoha to being a loyal and even cowed brat with a fierce loyalty towards those who were his comrades for less than a month.

The fuck is this?

Why the fuck is he back in Konoha?

What possible reason would he have? A girl he barely knew, or was he homesick?

It is an idiotic means of forcing plot to go as canon because you dont feel up to being original.

haha ending was good but kind of hilarious just wondering whats next? what is naruto thinking?

The whole thing is too stiff. Feels odd since everything is almost so blunt.

Even though this doesn't count as finished it's still really good.

Amazing! Naruto is now a god.

Good.

Interesting that Naruto is on to Orochimaru.

Love it.

This is really good.

Love it.