| Reviews for Kiss The Girl |
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pine193 chapter 6 . 2/8/2018 Please update, this story is amazing! |
Brooklynhills chapter 4 . 11/9/2017 Darn I wish you would continue! It amazing |
Brooklynhills chapter 6 . 10/11/2017 I wished you would continue;( It's been so long... |
morgana67 chapter 6 . 3/1/2017 OMG! This must be the best erotic fiction I have read in a long time, not just for this fandom but generally. Your descriptions are awesome and, okay, I admit I have a thing for Tyrion, but really did the trick, could almost feel what they were feeling, both of them if this makes sense lol It is extremely hard to write erotica in an elegant way that makes the reader really relate to the scene. One common mistake which I find hard to overcome when writing a sex scene is concentrating on the actions and not so much on the sensations that those actions bring about. You do it perfectly. You should write erotica for a living TBH. It's not at all pornographic, really elegant and well done and the character development is just phenomenal and that holds the whole thing together magnificently. Both are totally in character here. She has his doubts but cannot help but like him at least and recognise that there is a lot of goodness in this man. I personally think you drew both from the books and the show for this, as I would actually. I never understood why George made Tyrion so ugly. Okay, it is totally necessary for the plot that he is a dwarf but I personally feel that Peter embodies him perfectly. The Lannisters may be many things but in the main they are very attractive, why not a Lannister dwarf too. Also Sansa's description of his manhood in the books I think it is done on purpose negatively as I believe the author wanted to simply show the perception of a 12 year old virgin because the description itself was not negative, just her perception. In your story she comes to appreciate not just his "inner beauty" but his curls and his toned muscles etc and wow, yes all that talk about his "skills" has to come to something in the books I think I imagine him exactly as you described him in terms of his calmness and sensitivity and willingness to please. Their emotional journey was glorious and I almost cried over the ending. I would totally, totally love a sequel. I can see this reached and end because it was a journey from sex imposed upon them both to total bliss, so there is probably not much more to explore there without being a bit repetitive. However, you could do another story concentrating more on external factors, political difficulties etc, maybe children even and their domestic life. I would certainly read it! Overall, totally in awe! |
anja.quickert.9 chapter 6 . 5/5/2016 :-) |
Summerseve5375 chapter 6 . 10/27/2015 Really loved reading this. I hope you continue it some day. |
ThamasD chapter 6 . 5/31/2015 Wow. You simply must continue this story! Please? It's great! I need to know if they make it to a happy ending outside King's Landing! |
HR always live on chapter 6 . 2/18/2015 Read this all in one go. It's a gem of a story, and please write more! |
ChaleseWinchester789 chapter 6 . 1/21/2015 Loved it! |
Damoniaca4ever chapter 6 . 11/13/2014 Aaaawwww this end was perfect! They're leaving! maaa finally Casterly Rock! I can tell you the story is perfect and they are so sweet and passionate... why didn't happen this is books? WHY? PLEASEEE CONTINUEEE :DD |
wildhoneyfitri1 chapter 6 . 11/12/2014 Awww the ending was so sweet... The last fuck in King's Landing, hope their journey is going well... :) |
Ashmo21 chapter 6 . 11/11/2014 This chapter was awesome! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. |
CLTex chapter 6 . 11/11/2014 Wonderful chapter..really like the comfort and love they find in one another |
inka chapter 5 . 10/26/2014 cuteeeeeeeee |
wildhoneyfitri1 chapter 5 . 10/19/2014 To the Casterly Rock we go! |