Gorgeous retelling, i loved how poetic you described their movements.
I'm a big fan of this pairing and i wish more people like you would latch onto it and write ficlets such as this.
Thank you for writing this, it was wonderful.
(have a good day)

I like the story

Love and I am ew here how do you even make story can I even make one if I am new

Beautiful story. Loved the movie and love this version of it even better!

i recently started following you on deviantArt and i have read all of your story's and i love them all.

Sa!

...Well, this was actually a nice change from the usual stuff around here that is difficult to come by. While I haven't seen Maleficent just yet, I have read some of the book and can appreciate the details you put in here to make this worth the read so even if someone else hasn't watched the movie, we can get the general idea and still enjoy the story.