Saaayyy... I liked this. I actually liked it. I love the details you add in your story and your writing is pretty gosh darned good. Great job!

amazing story! loved it!

lol at the end there...good thing Donnie woke up! Man, was this an emotional fic...good job! :)

i'm glad Donnie made it!

This was great. This was a great story. _

I loved your description especially, and, in particular, how you played with writing how light fell on the characters and the scenes. It really made the portrayals prettier in my imagination and more realistic and human-like, and gave the chapters a humble, soft opalescent feel that helped with the scenes and with reflecting how the characters moved or felt in that moment. I liked it. A lot X)

Also, at the end, the way you screwed Raph over when all his promises came back to bite him was hilarious! XD

I'm really glad you're updating this! I can't wait for more!

Yep. Now Raph has to stick to his promises no matter what. Nicely done on this. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

Yay! Donnie's awake! Now we'll see what happens next. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

Awesome chapter. Yeah, I think Raph did take it too far this time, but we'll see how things go. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

YAY! Donnie woke up! Double YAY! You updated (I had feared this lovely story was abandoned)! Looking forward to more updates and interactions btwn the brothers including donnie now that he is awake :)

Then it'll be Donnie making all the ridiculous promises... oh no.
Ah, Raph. It's great of you to try to be a better person. Do it. Work at it. But it won't happen over night, like Donnie waking up.

You have to keep your promise, Raphie~

Yeah, Donnie woke up. I love that part, and Raph has to continue with his promises. Yay.

I am very much looking forward to when donnie and raph finally talk to one another. Ah ah ah, raph- you made a promise so you better keep it ;)

Dude. You make me cry!