Brutal proofreading, to the degree that it is annoying and detracts from the story. You should be embarrassed by having such shoddy work in print.

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I have been a fan of the Harry Potter books since I read the 1st one, there are magical. They are inspirational, reminding all that's read the/ seen the films that there is magic wherever we go. Perhaps not in the shape of wands, or floating chess pieces but that ability to make for even a little while, someone else smile. Many weekends have seen me lost in Hogwarts and all its mysteries. I know you have inspired millions of people, young and old. So thank you, for reminding us all that magic doesn't end just because you leave the land of peter pan behind.

i really like your story (:

I just love your interpretation of Harry/Ginny and the wizarding world. It all sounds so traditional like I believe it should be. The last few movies were too Muggle-ish in my opinion. You're such a great writer! :D :)

Not enough Ginny and Harry here but loved it all the same. It was great.

Really like it. Love how you write Harry and Ginny. Write more pls.

This story was really good. I'd never thought about the war continuing after Voldemort's downfall but you put a great spin on it that made it really believable. Harry and Ginny's interactions were just perfect. I hope you write more like this.

Pilko95

Nice job.

great job