Reviews for For the first time
bashfyl chapter 4 . 6/20/2018
thanks for sharing
georgiasuzy chapter 4 . 1/31/2018
Haha what does Eric care if Herveaux is bothered by Sookie joining them in the office! I hope you get a chance to update soon, on this and Change of Heart.
georgiasuzy chapter 3 . 1/31/2018
Then sunflower and note were even sweeter than the phone and dress. LOL at Pam asking Sookie her intentions!
georgiasuzy chapter 2 . 1/31/2018
Whoa! Eric stuck up for her when she denigrated herself. He let her slap Bill instead of being high handed. And now she feels whole. Hmmm
georgiasuzy chapter 1 . 1/31/2018
Sookie sure had a strong reaction to Eric. I can't wait to find out what that pull is that she felt towards him.
celajwhitney chapter 4 . 9/25/2017
please continue, this is good.
celajwhitney chapter 2 . 9/25/2017
mmmm! eric can hold me like that any time.
celajwhitney chapter 1 . 9/25/2017
don't let the readers influence you, this is your story! your english is pretty good, maybe you can find someone to help you? your story so far is very good and i want to read more!
ericlover69 chapter 4 . 9/23/2017
Loved it, I can't,t wait for more.
ericlover69 chapter 3 . 9/23/2017
If I might make a suggestion, you are using common for come on. I know English is not your first language. I just wanted to point that out. That said, this was a great chapter. I loved this story.
ericlover69 chapter 2 . 9/23/2017
In my opinion, you can abuse and bash Bill all you want. I am loving this.
ericlover69 chapter 1 . 9/23/2017
Great start. I can't wait to see where you take this.
scorpiolady68 chapter 4 . 9/21/2017
Just discovered this story-am very interested to see where it goes! Good Job!
Maison Deville chapter 4 . 9/21/2017
please continue this story
The Viking Trubie chapter 1 . 9/20/2017
This is an excellent story. Glad to see another update. Can I beta chapter 1 for you?
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