Reviews for The Mix-Up at Number 12 Grimmauld Place (Rewriting)
IloveCats1 chapter 7 . 7/27
Please update soon! As for demigods, I have no idea what year they're in, but I've always been interested in Oliver Wood as son of Nike, Luna as daughter of Iris, Bellona or Athena (she's brilliant in battle- she can keep up with fighters a lot more experienced than her and she's also really wise) and Neville as a legacy of Demeter. Legacy, not son, because he already has both parents but I don't think he has two grandmothers (Maybe I'm wrong).
Demigods I DON'T want to see is Draco as a son of anything especially if you excuse what he's done. When authors say 'oh it was all a misunderstanding' or 'it's part of a disguise' it's just lazy writing and honestly, kind of stupid. I also don't want to see Hermione as a daughter of Athena. HERMIONE ISN'T WISE. She also sucks in battle, she got taken out first I believe.
This is just my opinion though.
Cabin8hufflepuff chapter 1 . 7/21
STICK WEILDING MANIAC IS SO ME I AM A STICK WEILDING MANIAC
PopKitty chapter 7 . 7/6
Have Neville be a secret son of Demeter please
Jacki chapter 3 . 6/25
Leo my favorite so 1butt but what about will solace
Guest chapter 7 . 6/23
So how have you’re 2 years of school been?
Guest chapter 7 . 6/22
Will you be continuing?
BlackGryphon101 chapter 9 . 6/13
Nico may be able to sleep like the dead but I hazard a guess that he might not be in the same shape when he wakes up than when he went to sleep, courtesy of Gred and Forge ( I mean Fred and George). Love this fic so far keep up the good work and I eagerly await any further chapters.
Bookworm6908 chapter 9 . 6/8
Awesome story! But perhaps delete all the chapters you had before rewriting stuff. Because having chapters, and then rewritten ones kinda confuse people:)
Matt chapter 9 . 6/7
Um. Shouldn’t you delete the chapters that are from before you started redoing this? You know so no one gets confused?
ArtimuosJackson chapter 8 . 6/7
Why would Nico scoff if someone called him young man, everyone treat him as young boy in books which he is.
WeeboOverlord chapter 8 . 3/4
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blackcat.shoto chapter 8 . 2/13
Interesting chapter. May I ask if you will continue? I wish you a good evening!
Guest chapter 3 . 9/14/2019
nico is one of my faves with his tortured past and stuff and also can you add a scene where nico faces a boggart cause i love angst. apologies about the grammar.
Myra109 chapter 8 . 9/10/2019
I really hope you update this story soon. I've loved this story for years, and at first, I was a little iffy about a rewritten version, but when I started reading it, I loved it. Interest has grabbed onto me and refuses to let go, so I hope you update soon. It's much more detailed than the original, and the plot seems more developed, even if it is only the first chapter. I also can't wait to see Percy's interaction with Will because I think we all know Will is not going to be happy. Anyway, very good job on the new chapter one!
DarthVader7754 chapter 8 . 6/26/2019
So...is this new version gonna follow the old story line? Cause, honestly, rereading the same story, but the rewritten version, is kinda boring
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