I love the title. Everything was very well done. I could feel the emotions perfectly.

I have always loved the movie Who Framed Roger Rabbit. I love this story. I read it very frequently. Very good job on it.

Nice to see Roger comforting Jessica after a troubling dream.

Aw that was sweet, it really was. That why I love that couple. Roger is so sweet and Jessica is such a good wife to him. I love them. Excellent work on this.

This one was better than the last two, grammar-wise. Among the other tips I have given you so far, here's another: When a person does an action while/after speaking, a comma needs to separate the two. Example: "I'll always be there for you, buttercup," he said, stroking my hair gently. If something is said in a certain tone, the comma's not needed. Also, unless a person's phrase begins with "but," it is not acceptable to begin a sentence with it. Big grammar no-no.
Consider this tip among the others I have given you and your stories will be drastically improved grammar-wise. Story-wise though, you have no problem ;)
-Harmony

Love it! So sweet! Love the characterization!

This is so cute! _

A good one

That was cute!

that was freaking awesome i loved it
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