Awesome Chapter Again! Awesome Chapter Once Again! Great Chapter Again! Great chapter Once Again!

oh hell no

Nooooo! Seriously, what's with these guys and running off to get lost? If they just stayed where the were they would've been reunited already. XD Now the alter ego Bolt made relations worse, so I'm pretty sure that petting is out of the question when they finally reunite. Though obviously when she sees the absence of a scar with the real Bolt it'll be kind of confusing, but whatever. This has gotten interesting... (Man I hate that alter ego's guts!)

Anyway, can't wait for the last few chapters or so. (Especially for when Flarea confronts Karu. XD)

if i'm correct that pikachu is the dark side of bolt but separated from him, right

Ow my feelings, I just owie
I always enjoy your writing lovely c: Keep it up and I await the next chapter
But OW my god dAMN FEELINGS DKABGI sorry haha

Curse that Bolt imposter... I wish Gracie WAS able to kill him. If he wasn't so fast.

Jirachi Christ, you definitely took you're muking time! But, you know what? It was Muking worth it! i finally have an idea on who's What'sHisName and why Flarea cares about him so much. so Totally worth it, but you know who they need to fight? An exploration team called "Team Attriburst" composed of a Grovyle and Charmelon. come on, you know it's awesome ;) so come on, Do it :D

what happened to glacie search, i want to know how will she find bolt in the "human" world. it has been serval chapter since her perspective is shown. can you please do it in her/flanea/wattson view next time. love the story keep writing. call me pokemon123

add Cameron from unova. he's awesome!

What is with the abundant use of "pregnant" this is still awesome. *squee* make the sequel to the lost elements

I can't wait to see what happens to Grandine and the lucario that dawn found. Will Dawn go to the pmd world?

Fun stuffs. this is one of my top favorites in the pmd stories ! keep ip the great work.

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Amazing! Love is in the air! So much Icesparkshipping!

Even though this isn't May's Glaceon

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So amazing! So beautiful! So much Icesparkshipping!
Even though this isn't May's

If this keeps on in length and greatness this will be one of my top favorite pmd stories! i love it. your writing is very good. cant wait for another chapter.