i loved this

This is a good, interesting story :)

He wouldn't actually need new clothes ... A simple Hot-Air Charm would have gotten him dry quicker than the few minutes Hermione needed to get new clothes. But I understand it's for the story.

Your "Fine- fuck" should probably be split. It implies (by putting it in the same "") that it was said by the same person. While fine was actually said by Hermione and fuck by Tom.

And a simple Reparo zould have been fine for fixing his broken zipper. Oculus reparo is used to repair glasses (oculus meaning eye in Latin). It would make no sense to fix a zipper with an eye(sight) fix charm.

Still :) it was cute. Good job!

Kinda too OOC for me, I'm curious as to your other fic though. The one that's not available here because you're correcting it now, is there a summary I could read?

Hi,

This was a lovely, nice oneshot to read for when one is in a romantic mood. I normally prefer Tom darker, but in this plot, it fits. Plus, you have an AU, so anything goes. I liked how you used the Malfoys in this setting; that really fitted well. Thank you for writing,

xx Nerys

Loved it! It was short and cute. I also loved the hint of Brax..

more please! im curious did they grow up in the orphanage together?

uh, thanks for uploading this gem :) I really liked it.
I normally prefer my Tom to be a douche ;) but here in this fic I do really appreciate his less dark form. all is very relaxed and nice, as it should be in a holiday resort. the romance parts were nicely written. as was the difficult customer!Tom.

I also saw a bit of a difference in your writing style here and I must say it suits you very well. the fic flows, the dialogue, the characters' thoughts. it all fits perfectly together.

Wonderful, wonderful! It was really a refreshing read from all the darkishly possessive Toms. I mean, I have no quarrels about them (Oh merlin how I love them), it's just hard looking for Tom Riddles that are, well, naturally charismatic and laidback. I so adore the lightness of this story. Thank you for writing this! :D