so flippen cute

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I once thought about whether Dialal knew that his mistress had wings once, if he didn't, what would be his thoughts?
This fanfic gave me a clue. :D

very good! im making it a favorite!

This is beautiful. It's clear in the movie that there's way more between them than just a servant-queen relationship, especially from our dear raven's side, and I think you have described it wonderfully in your story. And, since I'm a sadist whenever I love a character, I admit that I love the thoughtof Maleficent having nightmares and being in pain. I definitely love this story :)

Niki

Oooohh, this is lovely.
Your writing is gorgeous, for one, as is the story you tell here. This would fit right into the movie; it has the same feel about it.

:3 es hermoso 16 años es mucho tiempo debió existir mas de lo que se mostró en la película

I need a sequel, with a slow building romance. Please. This is lovely.

I have to say that I really really enjoyed reading your story! I loved it! Well done! Very nice! I loved your imagery, your seeming simplicity, elegance, and yet complexity at portraying emotion and figures. Very beautiful! I loved it, especially at the end! Just lovely! And I agree with you! Maleficent and Diaval seem like such a cute and interesting couple! I'd love to read more from you! Your such a good writer! Keep up the good work!

Wonderful story! I simply loved it.

good job...God bless

So beautifully written.

This is my comment: please, please, PLEEEAAASE make a story from this. I mean... Mavial!

I loved this, and your depiction of their relationship really brings to light a special bond forged through the years. I just saw this movie last night and thought this fanfiction matched it beautifully. Wonderful work. :-)

Aww... Maleficent and Diaval really were too cute in the movie and this