Love this can’t wait to read more

The grammar needs some work! You have Edward sounding like a fucktard.

I liked the story line of where it was going but I didn’t like how Bella could so easily forgive Edward for what he’d do or say. She should of made him sweat it out and demanded more of an apology and not being so forgiving especially due to her past. Like when he pushed her against the wall, she should of made him grovel abit I think make him really work for it. The same with the cheating she shouldn’t forgive so easily. And him calling the club ‘scorpion’ from some striper he was doing at the time? It’s just gross like why not change the name and why even call it that just because you like her tattoo? I didn’t like the either but overall I enjoyed it just wish that Bella was so easy to forgive and make him work for it.

I love this story so far! Please please visit

Please update! :)

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Please Update!

I live where the story is headed. Great job with how you've portrayed the characters can't wait to read more.

What the FUCK?

Hope this story will be finished as it is really good story

You ever finish stories? What a waste of time.

Wow... best mob story... I see we are left with a cliff hanger though :(... please update

This is one of my favourite mobward stories and I’ve read it more times than I can count. Although it has been 4 years I still hold out hope you will come back and finish this.

You should finish this

I'm hoping that you will be finishing this story. I can't wait to find out who is in the car.