Wow! U kno what! This fiction is one of my favourites...and the theme is interesting too...i am honestly waiting for the next chapter! i Hope it comes soon...

*DETENTION I am pretty sure I have written it but!

although I liked it but had to admit that you really rushed the flashback not really giving the story much chance but the plot was nice there is no doubt about you can rewrite this giving the story more because you can certainly write well you...IT STARTED IN really nailed it keep up the good work

So great to see this being updated again. Great chapter.

Can you plz update your other amazing stories too plzz!?
Love twilight sparkle

That got post before I could even complete it! Damn.

Anyway, where was I...uh, yes. Damn, my feelings are getting the best of me!

By the way, I can really understand the way you feel! I literally had the same reaction when I read back to the first One-shot written by me, 'Endeavouring Kiss'...it was really horrible when compared to the type I am writing now! I seriously feel like 'What the heck was I thinking? And was I really that bad?!' So, I guess I can understand you! ; )

By the way, you did an awesome as usual!
Update soon! ; P

Woah!
It was...just too CUTE! Wow! I was like literally squealing The entire time! It was so KAWAII! Damn, im

You're going to end it? i really liked this one though I literally forgot about it until now but pooh! We are getting a definite closure! Awesome as always!

why will you update again?

I NEED MORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRE!

A.K. Co. & Ash Ketchum works there hmmmmm... i wonder if he owns it...

The love is real people. This isn't a drill. So happy that Ash admitted his love. Although Dawn's being quite the bitch rn.

i hope ash marry dawn

u did a good job

Nice... I liked it :)
Update soon

- Mega