here i am waiting for everything to go a thunder.

I mean it makes sense for them to resist each other.

my my what web we weave

oh-Caroline is going to get it.

oh the excitement

I love this great beginning of a friendship.

I had great fun reading this story! Thank you for writing it. :-)

what a lovely start of the story! :-)

I know this is an older story both in when it was written and when it was posted but I still want to tell you how much I love this version of the events and I am eager to read the last few chapters.

The only thing that mars the pleasure of reading this is a small thing and probably something you might have grown out of as a writer already considering how long ago you have written this.

That little thing is... The constant use of people's names in direct speach when it isn't really necessary. I feel like half the time somebody says a name it could easily be scratched and nothing would be lost. But as I said it is just a small thing and nothing that would take away too much of my joy reading this, I just skip over half the names and am fine. Hahaha

Thank you for sharing your lovely story! Read it all in one go!

I don't understand why the earl doesn't bring anne away to stay with him - at any time - and especially if lady C proves difficult

I presume ideas must have been different in Regency times but first cousins marrying is a very bad idea even though it is not actually forbidden. It still surprises me that people would promote the idea of cousins marrying. On a side note, it's amazing how much of it went on among the royal families of europe. In checking out queen victoria, who famously married her first cousin, you find many first cousin marriages among her relations. Its amazing they all managed to produce healthy children - ignoring the fact that queen victoria's children took haemophilia into all the royal families of europe.

But I remember he thought at the begging of the story (chapter 2 i think) that he will marry for love :( so how come he is denying himself to have feelings for Lizzy only because of her status? :(

I actually know someone called Bennet as a first name, why would the Darcy's not have used it?

ahahaha I suddenly realised the world cup you were talking about! put it this way: I'm half German