will you update ?

okay plot but you need to proof read and check your grammar big time.

please continue the story it have fantastic plot development and has potential to be even greater than it is right now

You should continue the story

can you lease update

please continue

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Great story can't wait till the next update. And I'm not sure there is a Lexi in Fairy Tail unless the person ment Levy McGarden a short blue haired girl. Or they could have ment the genderbender version of Laxus Dreyar grandson of Master Makarov Dreyar. Hope this helps. Keep up the great work.

Cool story add more plz!

Please please update this story soon . It is really interesting and I want to see what happens next.

This is costructive flaming. You need commas. Some question marks, dots, and exclamation marks. Better typing of the words. that is all.

Woooooww. I really like how this story turns out. Please keep me updated

Assassins creed go!

You have a great idea so far and I believed it is on the right track. Not that I'm a critic or anything...Keep it up! :) \(·)/

I think that person meant so say "Levi" the bluenette (has blue hair)