I really enjoyed this
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I was pretty excited to read this. I was looking for wish fulfillment.

Then we found out the original owner of the body was a psychopath who buried a claustrophobic and asthmatic classmate alive and convinced her he was going to leave her to die... ok at that moment I was glad the kid was dead.

I’m like it’s ok though because the mc is from our world and will be a different person. Nope. It’s like the entire plot of this doesn’t matter, forget the whole reincarnation thing Miyo is just a psychopath and not an interesting one. I am not rooting for Miyo, I’ll never root for Miyo, Miyo is weak and honestly needs to be killed off. Miyo serves no purpose in existence, nobody likes Miyo, not even his brother Sasuke. Honestly the world will never be better off for Miyo existing and 50 years from now when Miyo is bitter and alone and very very strong there will be no point to Miyo’s life.

I hate characters like this so much. I don’t hate psychopaths, I love characters that go around pillaging, raping, killing, etc... they are interesting and have some point to their existence. Miyo has no goal, no reason for living, no reason for existing. That means this novel which follows Miyo’s life is nothing but a waste of my time. Nothing is going to come of it, I don’t enjoy the story, the character, I’m not learning anything about the Naruto world, there is no new angle or new lens through which I can look at the Naruto world, this isn’t wish fulfillment.

This novel isn’t bad because it has poor grammar, it has great grammar. There are no spelling mistakes in this novel. This novel is trash because it serves no purpose other than to piss me off and I’m practically frothing at the mouth here over how much it pisses me off for the simple reason it wasted my time. I’d love a novel that pissed me off because I hated the things that happened in the novel.

This trash is just making me apathetic and I HATE feeling apathetic.

I do not believe you would have a wind nature you would have a fire nature as all uchiha do

aw damn, I like this so much! miyo is great, and I love ur naruto, sasuke, itachi and asuma too!

"Have you ever noticed Asahina sitting next to you in class, confused and clueless about what was being taught and shooting you hopeful glances? Have you ever paid attention to Fujisaki who struggles through taijutsu class and had, asked for your help?"

...Is that a small Danganronpa reference there or is it just coincidence?

I love that you've kept Miyo as an asshole throughout the entire story. Now, that's not to say that he hasn't changed - no, he has changed, as being another person in Miyo's body can be. But the great thing about his character and what you've done with him is that his personality stays constant. As a reader, I could easily see an pre-change Miyo being affected by an adult woman's memories doing the things he did. It was convincing and wasn't just given the reason of "oh, yeah, no, he's just an asshole from birth".

I also really appreciate how you don't just make him a classic fanfiction hero - someone who had a "bad" personality "fixed" with the goddamn power of friendship. Miyo never gets "fixed" by Naruto's "now-you're-a-good-guy" friendship power. And thank god for that because Miyo himself would be pissed if you had him suffer like that among idiots. XD

Keep up the great work and thank you for giving us this unlovable little demon-child! ;D

A majority of the reviews here are criticizing Miyo, which makes absolutely no sense.
He's a literal SI, he hasn't done shit to anyone. He's not the original Miyo.
The teacher is at fault when she's insulting and bashing at a kid who lost a majority of his family. It's even worse when she fucking compares him to the brother who massacred his clan.

Is the mc a guy? Why did you name him miyo if so? It sounds so feminine.

Eu amo ele seria interessante se ele fosse o Hokage no futuro

This was really good. Are you going to update it.

Will there be incest between him and one of his brothers? It just seemed like you implied it in an earlier chapter, plus technically miyo isn’t completely there brother

Hope you add more one day liked how unique of a character miyo is

Interesting reunion

He's kind of a caring asshole. A weird combination

Interesting chapter