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Earthiana2 chapter 42 . 5/3 Wow, color me very impressed. Very impressed and very much in love with your writing and oc. I'm sorry if this sounds dorky or not, but this story is beautiful, it's so rare on Fanfiction to find such a well developed oc to the point where I can SEE her as a person. As a striving author in the Fanfiction world myself, I cant help but be stunned at how well and how amazing every chapter is, in detail, characterization of characters that are your own and are not. I love the way you write Steve and Victoria's friendship and I LOVE how sibling like it is. Its absolutely adorable and it makes me smile when I see it, I love that there is no love triangle and what they have is so pure and beautiful. I love how Victoria is flawed...its weird to say but I do. I think you did her flaws wonderfully, and it made her feel so...real. The way you wrote her in, sometimes it was hard to forget that she WAS a oc and not a part of the canonical movies. This is a long winded one, but I tend to be long winded when I write, so sorry if it's a bit much but I just wanted to express how wonderful your writing is and its definitely something I strive to at least be close to in terms of level. Don't feel guilty for not posting, your life and health come far before something you dont get paid for and it's just out of your love for the story that we get to see it and read it. Sorry if it's much, but I just wanted to say, your writing is beautiful and I totally understand gaps in posting. I hope things turn out well for you. Anyways, I'm done now. Thank you for sharing your writing and Victoria with us. (And yes, I agree with Victoria, love Bucky, but really man? While she was still injured?) |
Saitama-sama chapter 42 . 1/26 After reading this fic all over again, I surprisingly ship Steve and Victoria over Bucky and Victoria. Also, great chapter and thanks for the update! |
Gemm13 chapter 13 . 7/28/2019 :) they needed this 3 |
Journey02 chapter 41 . 5/26/2019 Oh my god, I just LOVE your story and Victoria (and Bucky, so it helpsI hope you will update but, no pressure, take your time because this is how you do such jewel ! I hope everything is fine in your life and I wish you well ! And I hope (Sorry, I hope a lot xD) that you have not given up because it would be so sad, this is so awesome ! ! This is the end of this awkward message XD (and sorry for my mistakes, english isn't my native tongue). See you soonI hope. Again.) xD |
Avery chapter 41 . 5/11/2019 Hey, I loved your story, you are such a wonderful writer and I'm definitely going to check out some of your other works! I realize that you might have stuff going on but I hope you come back to this story eventually, I'd love to see where you take it. Thanks :) |
xtremediva13 chapter 40 . 3/14/2019 I hope you continue this story it's so good! Please finish it! |
Brandy Lebeau chapter 41 . 2/17/2019 I hope all is well in your life and fully understand that life gets in the way. You are doing much better then me I've not posted in years to my story *cringes*. Though I do find Victoria a little melodramatic and repetitive she is still a teen-adult and who you are at 20 is not who you are at 25. it is a interesting read though you often repeat things a little too much for drama, maybe or effect. I makes my attention drift and I find myself skipping paragraphs and not really missing anything... especially when it comes to the self hate monster stuff. all writers new and old are guilty of over stuffing their stories when something simplistic just works better. I hope this is making sense and I would really like to see some more Bucky cause let's face it I love his character and Sebastian Stan. lol your last note reminds me of the hate I got for my own character Isa in my twilight story. sometimes you wanna just say "if you don't like my writing then write your own damn shit" lmao |
DragonSlayer96 chapter 5 . 9/29/2018 Really, why the hell would she think that Steve was going to be afraid of her power when he had fought aliens and was in a team of superheroes? She’s emotionally weak even though she’s physically capable. I really hope she’d develop in future chapters. |
steph557 chapter 41 . 9/1/2018 Please please please update soon! I love this story and I hope you’re still continuing it. |
Mrs Traductor de Caballero chapter 1 . 8/24/2018 hey girl... are you ok? |
CharitinaX chapter 38 . 8/6/2018 God, I’ll be so honest—up until this point I half believed this entire story was meant to be a really well-written parody of a Bucky/OC story. I was dying of laughter every couple of paragraphs (I don’t even know what brand of humor your writing constitutes as but it’s highly entertaining) and I couldn’t even take the parts written about fighting to the death seriously because it just felt like you were going to spring something like “Surprise! It’s not actually Pepper you’re fighting, but like super realistic wax robots instead” on us. Moments that were cliche and typical in other stories were completely rewritten in yours. Again, I don’t even know if this was intentional or if it’s simply your writing style but the self-deprecating way in which Victoria narrates and her constantly absurd reactions to otherwise serious, brooding, angsty material...this was the Bucky/OC story that I didn’t know I needed until now (even if it continuously frustrates the hell out of me and forces me to hold myself back from I don’t know—physically trying to restrain the writing somehow). |
Dally'sTUFF chapter 12 . 5/7/2018 Well that hit me right in the feels Sorry don’t mind me I got something in my eye |
Secret-Lullaby2 chapter 41 . 4/10/2018 Hi! First off, I would just like to point out how amazing of an author you are and how appreciative I am to have been able to read so Something as great as this. However, I’ve been binge reading your series for days and just can’t seem to get enough of it! I’m anxiously awaiting your next update, and really hope it will be soon! Thank you so much! |
Kindle-the-Stars chapter 41 . 2/25/2018 Great update, I'm excited to see what happens as you move into Ultron - I think an encounter between Wanda and Victoria could be interesting, depending on what she made her see! Also, you're right that writers don't owe us explanations - we all have our own lives to live and writing often isn't the biggest priority! We are happy to have updates when your schedule allows :) |
DawnCrystal chapter 41 . 2/15/2018 I giggled at the protective boyfriend comments. Especially the "it's for the safety of the men." Keep up the good work and I hope you're doing okay! I don't want ya to lose heart doing this story. Also anytime you need to talk, I can listen. |